自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接，理由和个人愿望都很清楚，内容也比较具体。不过，时态需要保持一致：将“has”改为过去时“had”。“borrowed my neighbours”搭配不正确，应说“borrowed a bike from my neighbours”。另外，可以补充一个具体结果或例子，例如你通常在哪里骑车，这会让答案更完整、更自然。

示例: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child because my family had two children and we couldn’t afford one. I really wanted to ride a bike, so I often borrowed one from my neighbours. I usually rode it around my neighbourhood after school, and I really enjoyed it.

建议: 回答结构清晰，直接表达观点，并使用了“because”和“so”来连接原因和结果。词汇与题目相关，如“affordable”“convenient”和“commute”，内容也具体。可以将“low income workers”改为更自然的“low-income workers”，并适当加入一个具体例子或对比，例如共享单车在大城市中的普及情况，使答案更生动。

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. They are much cheaper than cars or motorbikes, so they are affordable for students and low-income workers. They are also convenient for short trips in crowded cities, and bike-sharing services are especially common in large cities. Many people use them to commute to work or school.

× When I was a child, I didn't have my own bike because my family has two children and we couldn't afford one.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have my own bike because my family had two children and we couldn't afford one.

句子描述的是过去的情况。“When I was a child”明确表示过去，因此动词 have 也应该使用过去式 had，而不是现在时 has。建议在叙述过去经历时，检查同一句中的动词是否都保持过去时。

× I really wanted a bike, so I often borrowed my neighbours when I could.

✓ I really wanted a bike, so I often borrowed a bike from my neighbours when I could.

borrow 的意思是“借用某物”，后面通常需要接被借用的东西；如果说明从某人那里借，还要使用介词 from。原句中的 borrowed my neighbours 意思变成了“借用我的邻居”，搭配不正确。建议使用“borrow + 物品 + from + 人”的结构，例如 borrow a book from my friend。