自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly and use a clearer time sequence. Correct the grammar: say “I had an accident” rather than “I had a accident,” “after that” rather than “I after that,” and “I don’t have a bike anymore” rather than “I don’t have any bike.” Briefly explain what happened in the accident to make your answer more specific. Avoid repeating “when I was a child” and “bike.”

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I had an accident when I was about ten, so I stopped riding it. I don’t have a bike anymore, although I might buy one again in the future.

建议: Start with a natural direct answer, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular.” Avoid saying that bikes are “the most popular thing,” which is too absolute and unnatural. Use correct articles and prepositions: “go to a park,” “such as Hangang Park,” and “many people ride bikes there.” Add a specific reason, such as exercise, convenience, or avoiding traffic, and use a linking word to connect your ideas.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large parks and along the riverside. For example, Hangang Park is usually crowded with people riding bicycles, particularly on weekends. Many people enjoy cycling because it is a convenient way to exercise and relax.

× Yes, when I was a child I had a bike, but I after that I had a accident suddenly, so now I don't have any bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike, but after that, I had an accident, so now I don't have a bike.

The phrase 'I after that I had' has an incorrect word order and an unnecessary subject. Use 'after that, I had' to introduce the next event. Keep the sentence structure clear by separating the time expressions with commas.

× Yes, when I was a child I had a bike, but I after that I had a accident suddenly, so now I don't have any bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike, but after that, I had an accident, so now I don't have a bike.

Use 'an' before 'accident' because 'accident' begins with a vowel sound. In the final clause, 'a bike' is more natural when referring to one bike in a general negative statement.

× Yes definitely the bike is the most popular thing in my country.

✓ Yes, definitely, bikes are very popular in my country.

The question asks about bikes in general, so use the plural noun 'bikes' and the plural verb 'are'. The singular form 'the bike' sounds as if you are referring to one specific bike.

× This is because when you go to Park such as Hanganguan, there's a lot of people using bike nowadays.

✓ This is because when you go to a park such as Hanganguan, there are a lot of people using bikes nowadays.

Use the indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'park' when referring to any park of this kind. Also, 'Park' should not be capitalized unless it is part of an official place name.

× This is because when you go to Park such as Hanganguan, there's a lot of people using bike nowadays.

✓ This is because when you go to a park such as Hanganguan, there are a lot of people using bikes nowadays.

Use 'there are' because the noun that follows is plural: 'a lot of people'. Use 'there is' or 'there's' only with a singular noun or an uncountable noun.

× This is because when you go to Park such as Hanganguan, there's a lot of people using bike nowadays.

✓ This is because when you go to a park such as Hanganguan, there are a lot of people using bikes nowadays.

Use the plural noun 'bikes' because the sentence refers to people using bicycles in general, not one specific bicycle. The plural form also fits the general meaning of the answer.