自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question, but it is too brief to develop the topic. Add one or two supporting details, such as whether you wanted a bike, why you did not have one, or what you used instead. This will make your response more natural and effective while remaining within the five-sentence limit.

示例: No, I didn’t. My parents couldn’t afford to buy me one when I was young, so I usually walked or played with my friends in the neighborhood instead.

建议: You give a clear opinion, but the supporting explanation does not fully answer why bikes are popular in your country. Also, use more natural phrasing: say “at that time” instead of “that time,” and avoid fillers such as “uh.” Organize the response with a linking word, explain the popularity of bikes, and then briefly mention your personal experience. Use “couldn’t afford one” rather than “couldn’t afford to buy a new one” if the exact type of bike is not important.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. Many people use them to exercise or to avoid traffic, especially in crowded cities. However, I didn’t have one as a child because my parents couldn’t afford one at that time.

× Yes they are, but uh, my parents did not buy me. Maybe they really couldn't afford to buy a new one that time.

✓ Yes, they are, but uh, my parents did not buy one for me. Maybe they really couldn't afford to buy a new one at that time.

The verb buy normally needs a direct object when referring to an item. Buy me can incorrectly suggest that the parents bought the student, so use buy one for me, where one refers to a bike and for me shows who receives it. Also, the correct preposition in the time expression is at: at that time, not that time.