自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời đi đúng trọng tâm và có thêm thông tin về thời điểm, địa điểm và người đi cùng. Tuy nhiên, “a unfur” là lỗi dùng từ hoặc diễn đạt chưa hoàn chỉnh, còn “It was an unforgettable” thiếu danh từ đi sau tính từ “unforgettable”. Em nên kết thúc bằng một ý cụ thể, chẳng hạn “It was an unforgettable experience.” Ngoài ra, có thể dùng từ nối như “so” hoặc “because” để liên kết trải nghiệm với cảm xúc và giữ câu trả lời tự nhiên trong 2–3 câu.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about five years old. I used to ride it around a nearby park with my friends, so it was a really enjoyable part of my childhood. It was an unforgettable experience.

建议: Em đã trả lời trực tiếp và đưa ra hai lý do hợp lý: xe đạp thuận tiện cho những quãng đường ngắn và thân thiện với môi trường. Tuy nhiên, câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và bị nối quá dài bằng “and”; “it” nên đổi thành “they” hoặc “bikes”, “a near nearby place” nên sửa thành “nearby places”, và “by people also use” cần viết lại. Em nên chia ý thành 2–3 câu rõ ràng, dùng từ nối như “Moreover” hoặc “In addition”, đồng thời thêm một ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời đầy đủ hơn.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. People often use them to go to nearby places or to the local market because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. For example, many students cycle to school every day.

× It was a unfur.

✓ It was unforgettable.

The article a cannot be used before a vowel sound, and an adjective such as unforgettable cannot normally be used alone as a noun. Use the adjective after the linking verb was without an article: It was unforgettable.

× It was an unforgettable.

✓ It was unforgettable.

This sentence is structurally incomplete because unforgettable is an adjective, not a noun. If you want to use a noun, say It was an unforgettable experience. If you use only the adjective, omit the article: It was unforgettable.

× I think it is really popular because people use it to travel to a near nearby place or just go to a market by people also use bike as a means of transport to protect the environment and.

✓ I think bikes are really popular because people use them to travel to nearby places or simply go to the market. People also use bikes as a means of transport to protect the environment.

The subject is plural, bikes, so use the plural pronoun them instead of it. The pronoun must agree with the noun it refers to. Remember to use it for one thing and them for more than one thing.

× I think it is really popular because people use it to travel to a near nearby place or just go to a market by people also use bike as a means of transport to protect the environment and.

✓ I think bikes are really popular because people use them to travel to nearby places or simply go to the market. People also use bikes as a means of transport to protect the environment.

Bikes are discussed in general, so the plural form bikes is more appropriate. Similarly, use bikes rather than bike when referring to bicycles in general. Keep nouns and their pronouns consistent in number.

× I think it is really popular because people use it to travel to a near nearby place or just go to a market by people also use bike as a means of transport to protect the environment and.

✓ I think bikes are really popular because people use them to travel to nearby places or simply go to the market. People also use bikes as a means of transport to protect the environment.

Near and nearby should not be used together. Nearby already means close, so say nearby places. Also, simply is a natural adverb to modify go in this context.

× I think it is really popular because people use it to travel to a near nearby place or just go to a market by people also use bike as a means of transport to protect the environment and.

✓ I think bikes are really popular because people use them to travel to nearby places or simply go to the market. People also use bikes as a means of transport to protect the environment.

The original sentence contains several ideas joined together without correct punctuation or connectors. The phrase by people also use is not grammatically connected to the previous clause, and the sentence ends with the unnecessary conjunction and. Divide the ideas into two complete sentences.