自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly and use the past tense because you are talking about childhood. Say “I didn’t have a bike” rather than “I don’t have a bikes.” Also, “when I was inside” is unclear; use “when I was a child.” Add one brief reason or detail to make your answer more complete.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a small apartment, so we didn’t have much storage space. Instead, I usually played football with my friends.

建议: Begin with a clear topic sentence, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Then support your opinion with understandable, specific reasons. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” and “however.” Avoid unclear phrases and make sure the answer stays focused on why people use bikes and where they ride them.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people use them to travel short distances because they are affordable and convenient. In addition, cycling is a popular weekend activity in parks and along the coast.

× Hello, I don't have a bikes when I was inside.

✓ Hello, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The singular noun bike is required after the singular article a, so bikes must be changed to bike. Also, the phrase when I was a child fits the examiner's question more naturally than when I was inside.

× Hello, I don't have a bikes when I was inside.

✓ Hello, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so the past-tense form didn't have is needed instead of the present-tense form don't have. Use did not or didn't + the base form of the verb.

× Absolutely, it is popular in my country where we have specifically by cast two weeks so we can't travel anywhere we're narrow places as we go to the adventure on the human return.

✓ Absolutely. Bikes are popular in my country, especially because we have bike paths, so we can travel to narrow places and go on adventures.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to the plural noun bikes. Use bikes or they instead. In this correction, repeating Bikes makes the meaning clear. Use a singular pronoun for a singular noun and a plural pronoun for a plural noun.

× Absolutely, it is popular in my country where we have specifically by cast two weeks so we can't travel anywhere we're narrow places as we go to the adventure on the human return.

✓ Absolutely. Bikes are popular in my country, especially because we have bike paths, so we can travel to narrow places and go on adventures.

The original sentence contains several unclear and incorrectly connected phrases, such as by cast two weeks and on the human return. The ideas should be organized into a clear sentence with a main clause and logically connected clauses. Use linking words such as especially because and so to show the relationship between ideas.