自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答基本切题，但时态和表达不自然。应将现在时“I have”改为过去时“I had”，因为问题问的是童年经历；“brought a bike to me”更自然的说法是“bought me a bike”；“because he provides each to me”意思不清，可能想表达“因为他给我买了一辆”。建议先直接回答，再补充使用场景或感受，并控制在2—3句话内。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

建议: 回答有对比观点，但表达不够准确流畅。“in the past time”应改为“in the past”，“it is popular”应改为过去时“they were popular”，因为主语是bikes；“other transport”更自然的表达是“other forms of transport”或具体说明“cars and public transportation”。建议用明确的“过去—现在”结构，并加入原因或例子来支持观点。

示例: Bikes were more popular in the past, but they are less common nowadays. Many people now prefer cars, buses, or the subway because these forms of transport are faster and more convenient for long journeys.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题是时态错误。考官问的是“小时候是否有自行车”，时间发生在过去，所以应使用一般过去时。将现在时“have”改为过去时“had”。

× When I was a child, my father brought a bike to me because he provides each to me.

✓ When I was a child, my father brought a bike to me because he provided one for me.

“When I was a child”表示过去的时间，因此后面的动词也应使用过去时。将“provides”改为“provided”。另外，“each”不能在这里表示“一个”，应改为“one”。表达过去发生的事情时，要注意主句和从句中的动词通常保持过去时一致。

× When I was a child, my father brought a bike to me because he provides each to me.

✓ When I was a child, my father brought a bike to me because he provided one for me.

“each”表示“每一个”，通常用于多个明确的个体，不能在这里代替“a bike”。这里应该用“one”指代前面提到的“一辆自行车”。此外，“provide one for me”比“provide each to me”更符合英语表达习惯。

× Uh, maybe in the past time it uh, is popular in my country, but now we usually use other transport.

✓ Uh, maybe bikes were popular in my country in the past, but now we usually use other transport.

“in the past”表示过去，描述过去的情况时应使用一般过去时。由于主语是复数“bikes”，所以“is”应改为过去式复数形式“were”。同时，直接使用“bikes”作主语比使用不清楚的“it”更准确。

× Uh, maybe in the past time it uh, is popular in my country, but now we usually use other transport.

✓ Uh, maybe bikes were popular in my country in the past, but now we usually use other transport.

主语“bikes”是复数，因此不能使用与单数主语搭配的“is”。过去时中，复数主语应搭配“were”。回答关于自行车是否流行的问题时，应明确使用“bikes”作为主语，并保持主语和动词在数上的一致。