自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Use the past tense because the question refers to your childhood: say “I didn’t have” rather than “I don’t have.” Answer directly and add a brief reason or detail to make your response more complete, such as whether you walked, used public transport, or borrowed a bicycle.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. Instead, I usually walked to school or borrowed my friends’ bikes.

建议: Your answer is relevant, but “especially those people” is grammatically incorrect and sounds slightly unnatural. Say “especially among people who...” and explain one or two additional reasons, such as convenience, exercise, or environmental benefits. Use a linking word such as “Moreover” or “However” to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among people who cannot afford a car or motorcycle. Moreover, many people use them for exercise and short journeys because they are affordable and convenient.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so the verb must be in the simple past. Use didn't have, not don't have. Remember that didn't is used with the base form of the verb: didn't have.

× Bikes are popular in my country, especially those people who can't afford to buy a motorcycle or car.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country, especially among people who can't afford to buy a motorcycle or a car.

The phrase especially those people is not grammatically appropriate here because people are the group among whom bikes are popular. Use the preposition among before people: especially among people.

× Bikes are popular in my country, especially those people who can't afford to buy a motorcycle or car.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country, especially among people who can't afford to buy a motorcycle or a car.

Motorcycle and car are singular countable nouns, so each needs an article. Because the sentence contrasts two alternatives, repeat the article: a motorcycle or a car.