自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 「Yes」で始めて質問に直接答えられていますが、時制と文の構造に多くの誤りがあります。“I like the bike”ではなく、過去の経験なので“I had a bike”または“I liked riding my bike”を使いましょう。また、“I could able to ride”は誤りで、“I learned to ride”または“I was able to ride”が適切です。不要な言い直し（“when you are when I was child,” “umm,” “finally”）を避け、誰がいつ何をしたのかを明確に述べてください。具体的な思い出や自転車を使った目的を1つ加えると、より自然で効果的な回答になります。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about 13 years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood. It was a great way to have fun and visit my friends.

建议: 質問には“Yes”と答えていますが、その後の理由が不自然で、文の意味も十分に伝わりません。“every mother they do shopping”ではなく、“Many people use bikes to go shopping”のように主語と動詞を一致させましょう。また、母親だけに限定する根拠が不明確なので、“people”や“local residents”など、文脈に合う語を使うとよいです。“because”の後には完全な理由を続け、利用者や用途について具体例を1つ加えてください。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to go shopping or travel short distances because they are convenient and inexpensive. In particular, students and local residents often ride bikes in their neighborhoods.

× Yes, I like the bike when you are when I was child.

✓ Yes, I liked bikes when I was a child.

The question asks about your childhood, so the verb should be in the past tense: liked, not like. Also, when you are is incorrect and should be removed because the correct past-time clause is when I was a child.

× when I was child

✓ when I was a child

The singular countable noun child requires an article. Use the indefinite article a before child.

× I could able to ride the bike

✓ I was able to ride a bike

Could and able to should not be used together in this structure. Use either could ride or was able to ride. The phrase was able to is suitable for describing a specific successful action in the past.

× umm finally, I actually I could able to ride the bike when I was 13 years old It's.

✓ Finally, I was able to ride a bike when I was 13 years old.

The original sentence contains repeated subjects, an incomplete ending, and an unnecessary contraction. A complete sentence needs one clear subject and one correctly formed verb phrase.

× because every mother they do shopping

✓ because every mother goes shopping

Every mother is a singular subject, so the verb must be singular: goes, not do. The pronoun they is also unnecessary because every mother already functions as the subject.

× every mother they do shopping

✓ every mother goes shopping

The noun phrase every mother and the pronoun they are used together as two subjects, which makes the sentence grammatically incorrect. Remove they and keep every mother as the subject.