自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly using the past tense because you are talking about childhood: use “had” instead of “have.” Avoid unclear expressions such as “an 18 plus bike” and “a 16 years old license,” unless you can explain exactly what they mean. Organize your response with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific details. For example, mention where you rode the bike or how often you used it. Also, use linking words such as “because” or “although” to connect your ideas naturally.

示例: Yes, I had a small bicycle when I was a child. It was designed for children rather than adults, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school. I really enjoyed cycling because it was a fun way to spend time outdoors.

建议: Begin with a clear answer and avoid repeating words such as “bikes.” The phrase “petrol fuel prices are very costly” is unnatural; say “fuel prices are high” or “petrol is expensive.” Avoid repeating “because” and complete the final sentence. Explain one or two specific benefits, such as saving money, using less fuel, or avoiding traffic. Use linking words such as “as a result” to make the response more coherent.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. Many people use them because petrol prices are high, so riding a bike is more economical than driving a car. In addition, bikes are convenient because they can help people avoid traffic.

× Yes when I was a child I have a bike but it's a small bike for children not a 18 plus or adult bike and I have also a 16 years old license for my bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike, but it was a small children's bike, not an adult bike for people aged 18 and over. I also had a bike license when I was 16 years old.

The question asks about the past, and the phrase when I was a child refers to a completed period in the past. Therefore, use the past-tense forms had and was instead of have and is.

× Yes when I was a child I have a bike but it's a small bike for children not a 18 plus or adult bike and I have also a 16 years old license for my bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike, but it was a small children's bike, not an adult bike for people aged 18 and over. I also had a bike license when I was 16 years old.

Use an before a word that begins with a vowel sound. However, the clearest correction is to avoid the unnatural phrase a 18 plus bike and say an adult bike for people aged 18 and over.

× Yes, I think bikes bikes are very popular in our country because people are using bikes more because the petrol fuel prices are very costly. So bike bike also gives us a more mileage and.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because people are using them more as fuel prices are rising. In addition, bikes give us better mileage.

The original response contains repeated words and ends with and, which leaves the final clause incomplete. Remove the repetitions and complete the final idea as a separate sentence.

× Yes, I think bikes bikes are very popular in our country because people are using bikes more because the petrol fuel prices are very costly. So bike bike also gives us a more mileage and.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because people are using them more as fuel prices are rising. In addition, bikes give us better mileage.

Prices are normally described as high or low, not costly. Costly describes something that has a high price, so say fuel prices are high or fuel prices are rising.

× Yes, I think bikes bikes are very popular in our country because people are using bikes more because the petrol fuel prices are very costly. So bike bike also gives us a more mileage and.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because people are using them more as fuel prices are rising. In addition, bikes give us better mileage.

Mileage is an uncountable noun, so it cannot be used with a. Use better mileage or more mileage, but not a more mileage. In this context, better mileage sounds more natural.

× Yes, I think bikes bikes are very popular in our country because people are using bikes more because the petrol fuel prices are very costly. So bike bike also gives us a more mileage and.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because people are using them more as fuel prices are rising. In addition, bikes give us better mileage.

The subject bikes is plural, so it must take the plural verb give, not the singular verb gives. Singular subjects take gives, while plural subjects take give.