自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接回应了问题，也提供了原因和经历，结构基本清晰。不过，“learn riding bike”应改为“learn to ride a bike”，“for three times”应改为“three times”，而“I'm very bad at balancing”在这里更自然的表达是“I was very bad at balancing”。此外，“I failed and then I quit”略显生硬，可以用“so I eventually gave up”连接。建议使用更自然的时间表达，并补充一个具体结果，使答案更流畅。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I couldn’t ride one properly. I tried to learn to ride a bike three times, but I was terrible at balancing and kept falling off. So, I eventually gave up and never became a confident cyclist.

建议: 答案开头直接回应了问题，也提到了观察到的现象和自行车道不足的问题，内容方向正确。但最后一句不完整，“So they just end up”没有说明最终结果，严重影响表达的完整性。建议补充完整结果，例如“they end up sharing the road with cars”，并使用更自然的表达：“when I commute to work or school”比“when I go to work or go to school”更简洁；“proper bike lanes”前可加“enough”，并将“for the cyclists”改为“for cyclists”。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see many people cycling on the roads, especially when they commute to work or school. However, there aren’t enough proper bike lanes, so cyclists often have to share the road with cars, which can be dangerous and inconvenient.

× I think maybe I'm very bad at balancing because I used to learn riding bike for three times but I failed and then I quit.

✓ I think maybe I'm very bad at balancing because I tried to learn to ride a bike three times, but I failed and then quit.

这里描述的是过去尝试学习骑车的三次经历，而不是过去的一种经常性习惯，所以不应使用“used to learn”。可以使用一般过去时“tried to learn”，表示“尝试学习”。另外，“then quit”中的主语与前面的“I”相同，可以省略重复的主语。

× I used to learn riding bike

✓ I tried to learn to ride a bike

“learn”后面表示学习某项技能时，通常使用“learn to do something”，因此应说“learn to ride”，而不是“learn riding”。建议记住结构：learn to + 动词原形，例如“learn to swim”和“learn to drive”。

× for three times

✓ three times

表示具体次数时，直接使用“three times”，不需要介词“for”。“for”通常表示一段持续时间，例如“for three years”；而“three times”表示“​​三次”。

× ride bike

✓ ride a bike

“bike”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”，所以应说“ride a bike”。

× there's no proper bike lanes for the cyclists

✓ there are no proper bike lanes for cyclists

“bike lanes”是复数名词，因此“There be”结构中应使用“there are”，不能使用“there's（there is）”。建议根据后面的名词判断：单数使用“There is”，复数使用“There are”。

× there's no proper bike lanes

✓ there are no proper bike lanes

主语“bike lanes”是复数，所以谓语动词必须使用复数形式“are”，不能使用单数形式“is”。

× for the cyclists

✓ for cyclists

这里的“cyclists”表示骑自行车的人这一类人，是泛指，不需要使用定冠词“the”。只有在指特定的一群骑车人时，才使用“the cyclists”。