自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly and give one clear reason. The phrase “not of not rich” is grammatically incorrect; say “my family wasn’t very wealthy.” The final phrase is unclear and should be removed or replaced with a specific detail. Use a linking word such as “because” correctly, and make sure your answer is natural and complete.

示例: No, I didn’t. My family wasn’t very wealthy when I was a child, so we couldn’t afford to buy a bike. I usually walked to school instead.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Use “ride a bike,” not “write back,” and avoid the unclear phrase “Either pop or not.” You could explain who rides bikes and why, using a linking word such as “especially” or “because.”

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to school or work, especially in smaller cities. They are convenient, inexpensive, and environmentally friendly.

× My family is uh, not of not rich when I was a child.

✓ My family was not rich when I was a child.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a finished period in the past, so the past-tense verb was is required instead of is. Remove the unnecessary words of not. For better fluency, avoid fillers and say: My family was not rich when I was a child.

× Either pop or not.

✓ They are either popular or not.

Pop is not the correct adjective in this context. Use popular to describe whether bikes are liked or widely used. The adjective must follow the linking verb are. You can also say: Bikes are quite popular in my country.

× Either pop or not.

✓ They are either popular or not.

The original expression does not contain a subject or a verb, so it is an incomplete sentence. Add the subject they and the linking verb are to form a complete sentence. In natural speech, a clearer option is: Bikes are very popular in my country.