自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp nhưng bị ngập ngừng và lặp từ quá nhiều, khiến câu trả lời thiếu tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng cấu trúc rõ ràng: trả lời “Yes”, nói ai đã tặng xe, khi nào và cảm nhận của bạn. Chú ý dùng thì quá khứ đúng: “My father gave it to me for my birthday”, thay vì “he is” hoặc “in my birthday”. Nên tránh lặp lại “my bike” và thay bằng đại từ “it”.

示例: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bright blue bike for my birthday when I was about eight. I loved riding it around my neighborhood because it made me feel independent.

建议: Câu trả lời có nêu đúng quan điểm nhưng chưa dùng cấu trúc tự nhiên; “my country is quite popular” cần sửa thành “bikes are quite popular in my country”. Các ý phía sau chưa hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều từ ngập ngừng, lặp lại. Hãy dùng liên từ để phát triển câu trả lời, chẳng hạn “especially” và “because”, đồng thời đưa ra chi tiết cụ thể về thời gian, địa điểm và mục đích sử dụng xe đạp. Có thể nói rằng mọi người đạp xe quanh công viên vào buổi chiều để tập thể dục hoặc thư giãn.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in the evenings and at weekends. Many people ride them around parks or along quiet streets to exercise and relax. However, in busy cities, some people prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient.

× my bike are a brighter ... by my person, my father

✓ My bike was bought for me by my father.

The answer refers to an event in the past, so are must be changed to was. The passive structure was bought is needed because the bike received the action, while my father performed it.

× he is, he gave me in my birthday

✓ He gave it to me on my birthday.

Use it to refer back to the bike, rather than repeating an unclear pronoun. The correct preposition for a specific day or date is on, not in.

× my country is quite popular

✓ Bikes are quite popular in my country.

The question asks whether bikes are popular, so bikes must be the subject. Bikes is plural and therefore requires the plural verb are. The phrase popular in my country gives the correct sentence structure.

× manage people ... use bike

✓ Many people use bikes.

Use the quantifier many with the plural countable noun people. Because people generally use more than one bike or are being discussed generally, bike should be pluralized as bikes.

× goodbye to bicycle, uh, around the park

✓ They go by bicycle around the park.

Goodbye is not the correct expression for describing transportation. Use go by bicycle. No article is needed before bicycle when it is used to describe the means of transportation.