自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答基本切题，但存在明显的时态、重复和词汇错误。应将“have”改为过去式“had”，“write it back”应改为“ride a bike”，因为 write 和 ride 发音相近但含义不同。建议先直接回答，再按时间顺序补充细节，并使用“because”连接原因。答案控制在2—3句即可，避免反复说“when I was”。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was very young. I got my first one in middle school and usually rode it to school because it was convenient and inexpensive.

建议: 回答表达了自己的观点和原因，但语法、发音对应的词汇和逻辑不够准确。“I don't think though”应改为“I don’t think so”，“write it electrical bike”应改为“ride electric bikes”，“bike didn't work for us”表达不自然。还需要注意：电动自行车本身也是自行车，因此不能用它来说明自行车不受欢迎。可以先说明普通自行车和电动自行车都很普及，再解释人们更偏爱电动自行车的原因，例如城市拥挤、通勤赶时间。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially electric bikes. Many people prefer them because they are faster than ordinary bicycles and are convenient for commuting in crowded cities. Since people are often in a hurry, electric bikes are a practical choice.

× I have my first bike when I was in middle school.

✓ I had my first bike when I was in middle school.

“When I was in middle school”表示过去的时间，所以主句中的动词也应使用一般过去时。“have”应改为“had”。

× I don't think though 'cause people usually...

✓ I don't think so, because people usually...

“I don't think so”是表达否定观点的完整结构；“because”用于引出原因。原句中“though 'cause”连接不正确，建议使用“because”或“because of”来说明原因。

× people usually write it electrical bike

✓ people usually ride electric bikes

修饰“bike”时应使用“electric”，表示“电动的”；“electrical”通常表示与电力系统或电器有关。此外，表示骑自行车应使用动词“ride”，而不是“write”。

× people usually ride electric bike

✓ people usually ride electric bikes

这里是在泛指人们通常骑电动自行车，因此“bike”应使用复数形式“bikes”。泛指一类事物时，通常使用可数名词的复数形式。

× they didn't really ride bikes

✓ they don't really ride bikes

题目询问的是当前自行车在本国是否流行，因此应使用一般现在时。“didn't”是一般过去时，应改为“don't”。

× so bike didn't work for us

✓ so bikes don't work for us

这里是在泛指自行车这种交通方式，所以“bike”应改为复数“bikes”。泛指可数名词时通常使用复数形式。

× so bikes didn't work for us

✓ so bikes don't work for us

这句话表达的是现在的普遍情况，而不是过去某个时间的情况，因此应使用一般现在时。“didn't work”应改为“don't work”。