自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer more directly and avoid repetition and self-correction. Use a clear topic sentence first, then add one specific detail or reason. The phrase “when I was a child” only needs to be used once.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring the area with my friends.

建议: Answer the question directly by saying whether bikes are popular, and then explain why. Correct the grammar errors: use “people like,” not “people likes,” and “ride a bike,” not “ride on a boat.” Avoid unclear sentences such as “So people are riding” and provide a specific comparison or location. Use linking words such as “however,” “because,” and “therefore” to make the answer more coherent.

示例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in coastal areas. However, cycling can be difficult in some places because the roads are not very suitable for bikes. As a result, many people ride mainly for exercise or leisure rather than for commuting.

× People likes to ride on a boat but the problem we don't have straight roads so it's a little bit difficult to ride the bike.

✓ People like to ride bikes, but the problem is that we don't have straight roads, so it's a little difficult to ride a bike.

People is a plural subject, so it must be followed by the plural verb like, not likes. The phrase the problem is that requires the verb is to form a complete clause. Also, bikes and a bike are more natural when speaking about bicycles in general.

× People likes to ride on a boat but the problem we don't have straight roads so it's a little bit difficult to ride the bike.

✓ People like to ride bikes, but the problem is that we don't have straight roads, so it's a little difficult to ride a bike.

The original sentence joins several clauses without the necessary structure. Use the pattern the problem is that + clause, and separate the main ideas with commas and conjunctions. This makes the relationship between the ideas clear.

× So people are riding. It's mostly by the coast.

✓ So people mostly ride along the coast.

The question asks about a general situation, so the present simple ride is more appropriate than the present continuous are riding. The phrase people mostly ride along the coast is also a complete and natural sentence, whereas It's mostly by the coast is unclear because the pronoun it has no clear reference.