自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor ve bisikleti neden kullanmadığınızı açıklıyorsunuz. Ancak “I really wasn’t using it” yerine daha doğal olan “I didn’t really use it” ifadesini kullanmalısınız. “Buy 1” konuşma dilinde anlaşılır olsa da IELTS’te “buy one” demek daha uygundur. Ayrıca “So currently no” ifadesi biraz kısa ve doğal olmayan bir kapanıştır; bunun yerine “So, I don’t currently own a bike” diyebilirsiniz. Cevabınızı bir neden veya kısa bir geçmiş ayrıntısıyla desteklemeniz daha etkili olur.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I didn’t really use it very often. As a result, my parents gave it to my younger brother, who was more interested in cycling. I haven’t felt the need to buy one since then, so I don’t currently own a bike.

建议: Cevabınız net bir görüşle başlıyor ve bir neden sunuyor; bu, temel yapı açısından olumlu. Ancak “we tend to use public transportation a lot more than it is in Europe” cümlesinde karşılaştırma hatası var. Daha doğal ifade “we rely on public transportation much more than people in many European countries do” şeklindedir. “Uh” ve “’cause” gibi dolgu ve konuşma ifadelerini azaltarak daha akıcı ve akademik bir ton kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca ülkenizde bisikletlerin neden daha az popüler olduğunu somutlaştırmak için trafik, şehir planlaması veya bisiklet yollarının eksikliği gibi bir ayrıntı ekleyebilirsiniz.

示例: Not particularly. People in my country tend to rely on public transportation much more than people in many European countries do. In addition, many cities lack safe and well-developed cycling lanes, so most people don’t see bikes as a practical means of transport.

× Since then I really didn't feel any need to buy 1.

✓ Since then, I haven't really felt any need to buy one.

The phrase since then refers to a period that started in the past and continues to the present. The present perfect tense, haven't felt, is therefore more appropriate than the simple past, didn't feel. The pronoun one replaces bike naturally.

× So currently no.

✓ So, currently, I don't have one.

The original expression is an incomplete sentence because it does not contain a verb. Adding don't have creates a complete sentence and clearly answers the examiner's question.

× We tend to use public transportation a lot more than it is in Europe.

✓ We tend to use public transportation much more than people do in Europe.

The comparison is between people's use of public transportation, not between transportation and the word it. The phrase people do in Europe provides the correct comparison object. Much more is also a more natural intensifier than a lot more in this context.