自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant and includes a contrast, but it is slightly contradictory: you say you did not have a bike, then mention memories of riding one. Clarify that you rode other people's bikes or rented them. Also, use the past tense in “my childhood was full of memories” and a more natural phrase such as “memories of riding a bicycle.”

示例: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. However, I often rode my friends’ bicycles, so my childhood was full of happy memories of cycling around my neighborhood.

建议: You answer the question directly, but several expressions are unnatural or grammatically inaccurate. Replace “mode of transfer station” with “means of transportation” or “a way to get to work,” and use “some people use” rather than “some of us are using.” Keep the answer concise and connect the two uses with a clear linking word such as “while.”

示例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people use them as a convenient and affordable way to get to work, while others ride them for exercise or simply for fun. They are especially common among students and people who live near their workplaces.

× No, I didn't have a bike, but my childhood is full of memories riding on a bicycle.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike, but my childhood was full of memories of riding a bicycle.

The question asks about the student's childhood, which is a completed period in the past. Therefore, use the past-tense form was instead of is. The correction also uses of riding to show what the memories were about.

× No, I didn't have a bike, but my childhood is full of memories riding on a bicycle.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike, but my childhood was full of memories of riding a bicycle.

After the noun memories, use the preposition of before a gerund phrase to explain the content of the memories. The natural structure is memories of riding a bicycle.

× Yes, of course bicycles are popular in our country. Some of us are using this as a mode of transfer station going to their work, and others are using these just to have fun.

✓ Yes, of course bicycles are popular in our country. Some of us use them as a mode of transportation when going to work, and others use them just to have fun.

The student is describing a general habit, so use the simple present tense use rather than the present continuous form are using. Use the simple present for regular activities, facts, and habits.

× Yes, of course bicycles are popular in our country. Some of us are using this as a mode of transfer station going to their work, and others are using these just to have fun.

✓ Yes, of course bicycles are popular in our country. Some of us use them as a mode of transportation when going to work, and others use them just to have fun.

Bicycles is plural, so it should be replaced by the plural object pronoun them, not the singular pronoun this. The pronoun these is also incorrect after using because the appropriate object pronoun is them.