自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答基本直接，也提供了原因，但有明显的语法、重复和表达不完整问题。应说“couldn't afford one”，因为这里需要代词指代一辆自行车；“I have to walk”应改为过去时“I had to walk”。删除“Couldn't afford 1”的重复和不自然表达。可以用“because”连接原因，再补充一个具体结果，使答案保持在2—3句。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. As a result, I had to walk to school every day, which took about twenty minutes.

建议: 回答观点明确，但存在单复数、冠词、词序和重复问题。“bike”应改为复数“bikes”，“a popular”应改为“popular”或“a popular form of transport”。“Our country is called bike big...”表达不清，建议直接说明自行车受欢迎的原因，例如价格便宜、方便或有助于锻炼。“in the old age”不适合表达过去的一般情况，可使用“in the past”。应使用“because”或“especially”连接细节，并给出更具体的说明。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They are affordable and convenient, so many people used to ride them to work or school. Nowadays, electric bikes are even more common because they are faster and require less effort.

× because my parents couldn't afford.

✓ because my parents couldn't afford one.

动词“afford”通常需要接宾语，表示“负担得起某物”。这里缺少宾语，因此应在后面加“one”，代替前面提到的“a bike”。

× I have to walk to school.

✓ I had to walk to school.

整段内容讲的是童年时期的经历，属于过去时间，所以“have to”应改为过去式“had to”。

× I think bike is a popular in our country.

✓ I think bikes are popular in our country.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类交通工具，应使用复数“bikes”。同时，复数主语“bikes”要搭配“are”。

× I think bike is a popular in our country.

✓ I think bikes are popular in our country.

“popular”是形容词，不能直接放在冠词“a”后面单独使用。“a popular”后面必须接名词，例如“a popular vehicle”；本句应去掉“a”，直接使用“are popular”。

× Our country is called bike big is a big bike country.

✓ Our country is a big bike country.

原句包含重复和不完整的句子结构：“is called bike big”与“is a big bike country”混在一起，导致句子结构错误。应保留一个完整的系表结构：“Our country is a big bike country.”

× In the old age, most people have a bike.

✓ In the old days, most people had a bike.

“the old days”表示过去的时期，因此主句应使用过去时。“have”应改为过去式“had”，以保持时间一致。