自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly using the past tense: “No, I didn’t.” The phrase “my family background is very big” is unclear; explain the real reason, such as not being able to afford a bike or sharing one with friends. Also, say “go to school” rather than “go to the school,” and use “my friend’s bike” if you mean one friend’s bicycle. Use a clear linking word such as “so” to connect the reason and result.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family could not afford one at the time, so I usually went to school on my friend’s bike. Sometimes, I walked there with my classmates.

建议: Begin with a clear topic sentence, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Avoid unclear phrases like “many bikes are popular such as some” and “all are big bikes.” Specify which types are common and explain why people use them, for example because they are affordable, convenient, or environmentally friendly. Use accurate vocabulary: “bicycles” usually means pedal bikes, while “motorbikes” means motorcycles.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and delivery workers. Many people choose bicycles because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. Motorbikes are also common because they help people avoid traffic and travel quickly.

× No I have not like when I was child because of my family background is very big so I mostly go to the school with my friends bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my family was very large, so I mostly went to school on my friends' bikes.

The question asks about the past, so use the past forms did not have and went instead of have not like and go. The expression have not like is grammatically incorrect; the intended meaning is did not have a bike.

× No I have not like when I was child because of my family background is very big so I mostly go to the school with my friends bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my family was very large, so I mostly went to school on my friends' bikes.

Use the singular form a bike when referring to one bike. Because the student traveled on bikes belonging to multiple friends, friends' bikes is the appropriate plural possessive form.

× No I have not like when I was child because of my family background is very big so I mostly go to the school with my friends bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my family was very large, so I mostly went to school on my friends' bikes.

We usually say go to school without the article when referring to the activity or institution. We also say ride or go on a bike, not go to school with a bike, when describing transportation.

× No I have not like when I was child because of my family background is very big so I mostly go to the school with my friends bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my family was very large, so I mostly went to school on my friends' bikes.

Use the indefinite article a before the singular countable noun child: a child. In the expression go to school, school normally does not take the when referring to attending school or traveling there for that purpose.

× No I have not like when I was child because of my family background is very big so I mostly go to the school with my friends bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my family was very large, so I mostly went to school on my friends' bikes.

The original sentence combines several clauses incorrectly. Use the complete structure did not have a bike when I was a child, and connect the reason and result with because and so. Also, because of must be followed by a noun phrase, whereas because can introduce a complete clause.

× Yes, in my country many bikes are popular such as some.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. Many types of bikes are popular, including large bikes.

The phrase such as some is incomplete because some does not clearly introduce an example. Divide the response into two complete sentences and use including large bikes to give a clear example.

× Some bikes are very affordable because they are used for riders and other persons.

✓ Some bikes are very affordable because they are used by riders and other people.

Use by after a passive verb to identify the people who use something: used by riders. Used for means intended for a purpose, not used by a person. People is also the natural plural noun in this context.