自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接表达了否定，但存在明显的语法和重复问题。应将“when you when I am a child”改为“when I was a child”，并把“we don't have”改为过去时“we didn't have”。另外，句末的“so no”多余；可以补充一个具体地点或结果，使答案更自然、完整。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. We didn’t have a suitable place to ride one near my home, because the roads were quite busy. As a result, I usually played indoors or walked to school instead.

建议: 答案有明确观点和原因，但“our city is our city have”存在严重语法错误，应改为“Our city has a high population density”。“in between people”搭配不自然，可以使用“among pedestrians”或“in crowded streets”。建议使用连接词“because”或“as a result”组织逻辑，并补充一个关于交通状况或自行车使用情况的具体细节。

示例: Not really. Bicycles are not very popular in my city because it has a high population density and the streets are often crowded. As a result, many people prefer taking the subway or buses, which are usually safer and more convenient.

× No, I didn't have a bike when you when I am a child because we don't have a place for me to ride a bike there so no

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because we didn't have a place for me to ride a bike.

这个问题询问的是童年时期的经历，因此应使用一般过去时。“I am”应改为“I was”，“we don't have”应改为“we didn't have”。另外，句中“when you”是重复且错误的表达，应删除。

× No, I didn't have a bike when you when I am a child because we don't have a place for me to ride a bike there so no

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because we didn't have a place for me to ride a bike.

“when you when I am a child”中的“you”与句意不符，而且“when”重复。主语是说话者本人，所以应使用“I”：when I was a child。

× Actually no, because I think our city is our city have a high people density so it's dangerous to ride a bike in between people.

✓ Actually, no, because I think our city has a high population density, so it's dangerous to ride a bike among people.

主语“our city”是第三人称单数，因此动词应使用“has”，不能使用“have”。原句中的“our city is our city have”结构重复且不正确，应改为“our city has”。

× Actually no, because I think our city is our city have a high people density so it's dangerous to ride a bike in between people.

✓ Actually, no, because I think our city has a high population density, so it's dangerous to ride a bike among people.

表示“在人群中”时，通常使用介词“among”，而不是“in between”。“among people”表示在许多人之间或人群中。