自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly, then add a few specific details. Use the past tense consistently: “was given” instead of “is given.” Also, the correct expression is “ride a bike,” not “write a bike,” and “stopped riding it” is more natural than “stopped that.” Avoid generalizations such as “almost everyone” unless they are necessary.

示例: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. It was given to me by one of my father’s friends, and I was really excited to ride it around my neighborhood. However, I eventually outgrew it and stopped riding it.

建议: The answer is relevant and includes a specific example, but improve grammatical accuracy and natural phrasing. Use “which allow people” because “bikes” is plural, and say “rent a bike as easily as taking a taxi” rather than comparing it to “hailing a taxi.” Replace the vague ending “something like that” with a clear explanation, and use “return it to a designated area” instead of “put it back on the street.”

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. In recent years, shared-bike services have become common because people can simply scan a QR code and rent a bike within seconds. After using one, they can return it to a designated area, which makes cycling a convenient and affordable way to travel.

× Yeah, I think that almost everyone has a bike when they're young, and when I was young I had a pink bike, which is given by my father's friend.

✓ Yeah, I think that almost everyone has a bike when they're young, and when I was young I had a pink bike, which was given by my father's friend.

The sentence describes receiving the bike in the past, so the passive verb should be in the past tense: was given, not is given. Use was or were when describing completed events in the past.

× Yeah, of course. And especially nowadays we have sharing bikes, which allows people just to scan a QR code and then they can rent a bike just like hailing a taxi, something like that.

✓ Yeah, of course. And especially nowadays we have sharing bikes, which allow people just to scan a QR code and then they can rent a bike just like hailing a taxi, something like that.

The relative pronoun which refers to the plural noun sharing bikes, so the verb must also be plural: allow, not allows. Make sure the verb agrees with the noun that which refers to.