自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 这个回答没有直接回答“你小时候是否有自行车”，而且把问题中的时态和含义混淆了。应使用过去时“Did you have...?”，先明确回答“Yes”或“No”，再补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、使用场景或学习骑车的经历。注意不要重复或改写考官的问题。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bike that my parents bought for me when I was about six. I often rode it around our neighborhood after school.

建议: 这个回答只是重复了考官的问题，没有表达自己的观点，因此没有完成交际任务。应先直接回答“Yes, I do”或“No, I don’t”，然后说明原因，并提供具体例子或进行简单对比。建议使用“because”“for example”或“however”等连接词，使回答更连贯。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and commuters. They are affordable and convenient for short journeys. For example, many people use shared bikes to travel between subway stations and their workplaces.

× Do you have a bike when you try?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

问题使用的是一般现在时“Do you have”，但考官的问题是在询问过去的经历“when you were a child”，因此应使用一般过去时“Did you have”。此外，“when you try”不能表达“当你是个孩子时”的意思，应改为“when you were a child”。