自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly, but avoid repeating the same idea several times, such as “I didn’t have one” and “I always dreamed of having one.” Use a more natural expression, such as “learn to ride a bike,” instead of “try to ride a bike.” You could also add a specific reason why you wanted a bike or explain when you hope to buy one.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, although I really wanted one. I hoped to learn how to ride because many of my friends cycled around the neighborhood. I’m still interested in cycling, so I might buy a bike when I have more free time.

建议: Your answer is relevant and includes a clear observation, but “riding their bike” should be “riding their bikes.” Improve the sentence structure by using a linking word such as “for example” or “because,” and avoid making the final sentence too long. You could also mention another group of cyclists or a specific reason why bikes are popular, such as their affordability or environmental benefits.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, I often see students riding their bikes to school early in the morning, and many of the bikes have colorful designs. They are popular because they are affordable, convenient, and environmentally friendly.

× Every day in the early morning I see lots of students riding their bike to school and their bikes are always in various colors and designs which makes me think that bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ Every day in the early morning, I see lots of students riding their bikes to school, and their bikes are always in various colors and designs, which makes me think that bikes are very popular in my country.

The plural noun students is followed by the possessive determiner their, so bikes is more consistent than bike when referring to the bicycles used by the students. The original sentence is understandable, but using the plural form creates clearer number agreement. Also, commas improve the readability of the sentence, although punctuation is not the main grammar issue here.