自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly in the past tense: use “had” and “was 13,” not “have” and “I’m in 13.” Avoid repeated words and fillers such as “uh,” “like,” and “umm.” Use a clear structure: answer the question, add when you got the bike, and explain what you did with it. Use “would ride my bike” instead of “would like go out and ride a bike” because you are describing a past habit.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me when I was 13, and I was really excited about it. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school and at weekends.

建议: Use the correct adjective form: “cycling is popular,” not “riding a bike is a popular.” Give a specific reason and avoid repetition of “people” and “in a street.” The phrase “aerobic exercise” is more natural than “a kind of aerobics exercise.” Improve coherence by using a linking word such as “because” or “especially,” and mention where or why people cycle.

示例: Yes, cycling is quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people ride bikes for exercise because it is an affordable and convenient way to stay fit. Others use them to commute or cycle in parks at the weekend.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child. I'm in 13. My mom bought me a bicycle, a bicycle and I would like go out and ride a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. When I was 13, my mom bought me a bicycle, and I would go out and ride it.

The question asks about a past childhood experience, so use the past tense had instead of the present tense have. Use was, not am, because the speaker was 13 in the past. The phrase when I was 13 is the natural way to express age in this context.

× I would like go out and ride a bike.

✓ I would go out and ride it.

After would like, use the infinitive with to: would like to go. However, because the speaker is describing a repeated past habit, would go is more appropriate here. After would, use the base form of the verb, go.

× In my country, riding a bike is a popular.

✓ In my country, riding a bike is popular.

Popular is an adjective and cannot be used with a by itself. Use popular without an article when describing something generally. Alternatively, you could say riding a bike is a popular activity.

× People ride their bikes in a street, in a street.

✓ People ride their bikes on the street.

Use on rather than in when referring to riding or traveling on a road or street. The phrase on the street is also the natural expression for talking about street activity in general.