自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly in the past tense: say “No, I didn’t have a bike.” Then explain that you sometimes borrowed your friends’ bikes. Use correct phrases such as “when I was a child,” “ride my friends’ bikes,” and “borrowed.” Also, avoid beginning with “No, I don’t have,” because the question refers to the past.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I sometimes borrowed my friends’ bikes and rode them around my neighborhood. I really enjoyed cycling with them after school.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence: “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Then give a specific reason, such as their affordability, convenience, or health benefits. Use “people,” not “peoples,” and say “ride bikes” rather than “enjoying the alone in the bike.” Add a linking word such as “because” or “in addition” to connect your ideas naturally.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. Many people also ride them to exercise and avoid traffic. In addition, cycling is becoming more popular among young adults.

× No I don't have by when I was child I used to my friend bikes sometimes.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child. I sometimes used to ride my friends' bikes.

The question asks about the past, so use did not have instead of do not have. The verb was is also needed in the past-tense clause when I was a child.

× No I don't have by when I was child I used to my friend bikes sometimes.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child. I sometimes used to ride my friends' bikes.

Use the singular noun bike after a because the student is referring to one bike. Use friends' bikes if the bikes belong to more than one friend.

× No I don't have by when I was child I used to my friend bikes sometimes.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child. I sometimes used to ride my friends' bikes.

The singular countable noun bike needs the article a. The phrase child also needs a because it refers to one unspecified child.

× No I don't have by when I was child I used to my friend bikes sometimes.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child. I sometimes used to ride my friends' bikes.

The original answer is a run-on sentence and is missing the main verb after used to. Divide it into two sentences and use used to ride to express a past habit.

× Yes, in my country bikes are popular because some peoples are enjoying the alone in the bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because some people enjoy riding bikes alone.

People is already the plural form of person, so peoples is incorrect here. Peoples is normally used when referring to different ethnic or cultural groups.

× Yes, in my country bikes are popular because some peoples are enjoying the alone in the bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because some people enjoy riding bikes alone.

This sentence describes a general reason or regular situation, so use the simple present enjoy rather than the present continuous are enjoying.

× Yes, in my country bikes are popular because some peoples are enjoying the alone in the bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because some people enjoy riding bikes alone.

The verb enjoy is followed by a gerund, or -ing form, when another activity follows it. Therefore, say enjoy riding, not enjoy followed by an incorrect noun phrase.

× Yes, in my country bikes are popular because some peoples are enjoying the alone in the bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because some people enjoy riding bikes alone.

Use on rather than in with a bike because a rider sits on a bike. In addition, bikes is used without the because the sentence refers to bikes in general.

× Yes, in my country bikes are popular because some peoples are enjoying the alone in the bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because some people enjoy riding bikes alone.

Alone is an adjective or adverb, not a noun, so it cannot follow the article the in the phrase the alone. Here, alone correctly modifies the activity riding bikes.

× Yes, in my country bikes are popular because some peoples are enjoying the alone in the bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because some people enjoy riding bikes alone.

The phrase enjoying the alone in the bike does not form a complete or meaningful verb phrase. Use the complete structure enjoy riding bikes alone to express the intended idea.