自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly and complete your response with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific details. Use the past tense consistently: say “my dad bought,” “I rode,” and “I grew up,” rather than changing between present and past forms. Avoid hesitations and unfinished phrases such as “my highs.” You could also explain how often you rode the bike or why you liked it. Keep the answer to two or three complete sentences.

示例: Yes, I had a pink bicycle when I was a child. My dad bought it for me, and I often rode it to school when I was in primary school. I really enjoyed riding it because it gave me a sense of freedom.

建议: Your answer is direct and includes a clear reason, but improve the grammar and make the comparison more natural. Use plural nouns and subject-verb agreement: “motorbikes have engines” and “bicycles.” Avoid repeating “engines” and connect your reason more smoothly with “because” or “as a result.” Add a specific example, such as people using motorbikes for commuting, to make your answer more developed.

示例: Not really. In my country, people generally prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient than bicycles. For example, many people use them to commute to work, especially in busy cities where they need to travel long distances quickly.

× I drive, I drove it ... when I grow up.

✓ I drove it ... when I grew up.

The response describes events in the past, so the verbs should be in the past tense: drive becomes drove, and grow becomes grew. Because the speaker is discussing childhood, a more natural version is: I drove it when I was in primary school.

× When I grow up, my highs uh.

✓ I drove it when I was in primary school.

The original ending is incomplete and does not contain a clear grammatical structure. It also introduces an unfinished idea. Complete the sentence with a clear subject, verb, and complement, or remove the unfinished phrase.

× In my country people tend to ride motorbike.

✓ In my country, people tend to ride motorbikes.

The sentence refers to motorbikes in general, so the plural noun motorbikes is required. Use a plural noun when speaking about a general group of vehicles or objects.

× Motorbike have engines, strong engines.

✓ Motorbikes have strong engines.

The plural subject motorbikes correctly takes the plural verb have. The original sentence also repeats engines unnecessarily, so strong engines is a clearer expression.

× People can move faster than bicycle.

✓ People can move faster than bicycles.

The comparison is general, so bicycles should be plural. When comparing one general type of vehicle with another, use plural nouns: motorbikes are faster than bicycles.