自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答基本切题，但存在明显的时态、搭配和句子结构问题。应使用过去时“had”或“owned”，并将“in my kindergarten”改为“when I was in kindergarten”。“write”应为“ride”，因为自行车是骑而不是写；“my grandpa teaches me”也应改为“my grandpa taught me”。建议先直接回答，再补充具体细节，并用“because”连接原因。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was in kindergarten, and my grandpa taught me how to ride it. He often stayed beside me and protected me while I was learning.

建议: 回答表达了个人观察，但没有清晰、直接地说明自行车是否受欢迎。建议开头明确表态，例如“Not particularly”或“Yes, they are quite popular”，并使用正确搭配：“ride bikes”而不是“be fans of bike”，“public transportation”前可加“take”， “badmint”应拼写为“badminton”。同时，使用“because”或“while”连接原因和对比，并避免“I'm not sure this question”等不自然表达。

示例: I don’t think bikes are particularly popular among my friends. Most of them prefer taking public transportation because it is more convenient for commuting. However, some people ride bikes for exercise, although many of my friends choose activities such as badminton instead.

× Of course, I have a bike in my kindergarten and at that time my grandpa. Teaches me how to write and always protects me.

✓ Of course, I had a bike in kindergarten, and at that time my grandpa taught me how to write and always protected me.

问题描述的是童年时期的经历，因此应该使用一般过去时。把“have”改为“had”，“teaches”改为“taught”，“protects”改为“protected”。另外，“at that time my grandpa”不能单独构成完整句子，应与后面的内容连接起来。

× At that time my grandpa.

✓ At that time, my grandpa taught me how to write and always protected me.

“At that time my grandpa”只有时间状语和主语，没有谓语动词，因此不是完整句子。需要加入“taught”和“protected”等谓语动词，并与前后内容组成完整句子。

× I'm not sure this question in my experience.

✓ I'm not sure about this question. In my experience, my friends aren't big fans of bikes.

表达“对某个问题不确定”时，应使用介词“about”，所以应说“I'm not sure about this question”。“in my experience”表示“根据我的经验”，应放在后一个句子的开头，并用逗号隔开。

× I'm not sure this question in my experience, my friends aren't big fans of bike that always tend to take maybe public transportation.

✓ I'm not sure about this question. In my experience, my friends aren't big fans of bikes, and they tend to take public transportation.

原句把多个意思直接连接在一起，缺少必要的标点和连接结构，导致句子结构混乱。“I'm not sure about this question”应单独成句；后面用“In my experience”引出个人经验，并用“and”连接两个完整分句。

× My friends aren't big fans of bike.

✓ My friends aren't big fans of bikes.

“bike”在这里表示自行车这一类交通工具，应该使用复数形式“bikes”。“fans of bikes”表示“自行车的爱好者”。

× My friends aren't big fans of bike.

✓ My friends aren't big fans of bikes.

可数名词“bike”单数形式通常需要限定词，例如“a bike”。但这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物，因此使用复数“bikes”更自然，也避免了冠词错误。