自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答基本直接，也提供了时间和原因，但存在明显的时态、代词和搭配错误。应将“have”改为过去时“had”，并把“when you were a child”改为“when I was a child”；“gave my own bike”应改为“gave me my own bike”，“hoped me to”应改为“hoped that I would”或“wanted me to”。开头的“And”可以删除。建议使用“Actually/Yes”直接回答，并用一个连接词补充具体细节。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. If I remember correctly, my parents gave me my own bike when I was eight. They wanted me to ride it to school by myself, so I became quite independent at a young age.

建议: 回答表达了“自行车很受欢迎”的观点，并提供了共享单车和通勤两个理由，但句子结构不清晰，影响理解。由于问题询问现在的情况，应使用“think”而不是“thought”；“bikes ... is popularity”应改为“bikes are popular”；“whenever they h how much their years old”需要改为“regardless of their age”。建议按照“观点+原因+具体例子”的结构作答，并使用“because”或“especially”连接信息。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. This is mainly because shared-bike services are widely available in cities. People of different ages often ride them to work, school, or nearby shops, especially during rush hour.

× And yes, I have a bike when you were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

这里描述的是童年时期的经历，所以要使用一般过去时。have 的过去式是 had。同时，when 从句中的 you 应改为 I，因为学生是在描述自己的童年。

× And yes, I have a bike when you were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

主句和 when 从句都在描述学生自己，因此应该使用第一人称 I，而不是第二人称 you。

× If I remembered correctly, my parents gave my own bike when I was eight years old.

✓ If I remember correctly, my parents gave me my own bike when I was eight years old.

give 的常见结构是“give + 人 + 物”。这里需要使用宾格代词 me，表示“父母给了我一辆属于我自己的自行车”。

× They hoped me to ride a bike to go to school by myself.

✓ They hoped that I would ride a bike to school by myself.

hope 不能使用“hope + 人 + to do”的结构。应使用“hope that + 从句”，这里用 I would ride 表示父母当时的希望。ride a bike to school 已经表示“骑车去上学”，通常不需要再加 to go。

× Yes, I thought bikes in my country is popularity because now there are many shared bikes and people whenever they h how much their years old, they usually ride bikes to go to work or school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes in my country are popular because there are now many shared bikes, and people, no matter how old they are, usually ride bikes to work or school.

问题询问的是自行车现在是否流行，所以主句应使用一般现在时 think，而不是过去式 thought。

× Yes, I thought bikes in my country is popularity because now there are many shared bikes and people whenever they h how much their years old, they usually ride bikes to go to work or school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes in my country are popular because there are now many shared bikes, and people, no matter how old they are, usually ride bikes to work or school.

主语 bikes 是复数，所以 be 动词要使用 are，不能使用 is。建议先找出句子的主语，再根据主语的单复数选择 is 或 are。

× Yes, I thought bikes in my country is popularity because now there are many shared bikes and people whenever they h how much their years old, they usually ride bikes to go to work or school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes in my country are popular because there are now many shared bikes, and people, no matter how old they are, usually ride bikes to work or school.

popularity 是名词，表示“受欢迎程度”；这里需要描述 bikes 的性质，因此应使用形容词 popular，表示“受欢迎的”。

× Yes, I thought bikes in my country is popularity because now there are many shared bikes and people whenever they h how much their years old, they usually ride bikes to go to work or school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes in my country are popular because there are now many shared bikes, and people, no matter how old they are, usually ride bikes to work or school.

原句中“people whenever they h how much their years old”结构不完整，句意不清。表达“无论人们多大年纪”时，可以使用固定结构“no matter how old they are”。