自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn chưa trả lời câu hỏi của giám khảo mà lặp lại câu hỏi với từ “tired”, khiến câu trả lời bị lệch chủ đề. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng “Yes” hoặc “No”, sau đó thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về chiếc xe, thời điểm sử dụng hoặc hoạt động bạn thường làm. Câu trả lời nên dài khoảng 2–3 câu và dùng thì quá khứ đơn vì câu hỏi nói về thời thơ ấu.

示例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

建议: Bạn đã đưa ra quan điểm nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên và phần lý do chưa hợp lý. Hãy nói “I don’t think they are very popular” thay vì “I think it is no”; sửa “a lot of car and bus” thành “a lot of cars and buses”. Ngoài ra, “so it is fresh air” không phù hợp với ý trước; nhiều ô tô và xe buýt thường dẫn đến “air pollution”, còn xe đạp giúp không khí sạch hơn. Hãy sắp xếp câu trả lời theo cấu trúc: quan điểm → lý do → ví dụ hoặc ngoại lệ.

示例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because there are many cars and buses, especially in big cities. As a result, the roads are often crowded and polluted, although some people still cycle for exercise.

× I think it is no because in my country there are a lot of car and bus, so it is fresh air.

✓ I think it is no because in my country there are a lot of cars and buses, so it is fresh air.

The plural quantifier a lot of must be followed by plural countable nouns. Therefore, car should be cars and bus should be buses. Remember to use plural nouns after a lot of when referring to more than one countable item.

× I think it is no because in my country there are a lot of car and bus, so it is fresh air.

✓ I do not think so because in my country there are a lot of cars and buses, so there is less fresh air.

The expression I think it is no is not a natural or grammatically appropriate way to disagree. Use I do not think so instead. The final clause also needs to express the existence of fresh air clearly, so there is less fresh air is more appropriate.

× I think it is no because in my country there are a lot of car and bus, so it is fresh air.

✓ I do not think so because in my country there are a lot of cars and buses, so there is less fresh air.

Use there is before an uncountable noun such as fresh air. The form it is fresh air does not correctly express the existence or amount of fresh air. Use there is less fresh air to explain that pollution reduces the amount of clean air.