自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamışsınız; ancak cevap birçok tekrar, yarım kalmış ifade ve dilbilgisi hatası içeriyor. “I learned to drive and bike” yerine “I learned to ride a bike” denmelidir; “drive” araba kullanmak için kullanılır. Cevabınızı çocukluk döneminizle ilgili kısa ve net bir ayrıntıyla tamamlayın. Örneğin bisikletinizi nerede kullandığınızı veya bisiklete binmeyi nasıl öğrendiğinizi belirtin.

示例: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was about seven years old. I usually rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends, and I really enjoyed it.

建议: Fikrinizi belirtmeye çalışmışsınız; ancak cevap tamamlanmamış ve “Turkey don’t” gibi özne-fiil uyumu hataları içeriyor. “I don’t think bikes are very popular in Turkey” şeklinde doğrudan bir topic sentence kullanın. Daha sonra bisiklet yollarının yetersizliği, trafik veya insanların araba kullanmayı tercih etmesi gibi belirli bir neden ekleyin. “Actually” ve “but” gibi bağlaçları gereksiz yere tekrarlamaktan kaçının ve cevabı tam bir cümleyle bitirin.

示例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in Turkey. In many cities, there are not enough cycle lanes, so people often feel unsafe riding on busy roads. As a result, most people prefer using cars or public transport.

× Turkey don't improve this subject.

✓ Turkey doesn't improve in this area.

Turkey is a singular subject, so the present-tense auxiliary must be does, not do. In negative sentences, use doesn't + the base form of the verb. Also, improve in this area is more natural than improve this subject.

× I don't know how can I say.

✓ I don't know how I can say it.

In an indirect question after I don't know, use statement word order: subject + verb. Therefore, say how I can, not how can I. The pronoun it is added because say normally needs a clear object in this context.

× Generally, people very kind.

✓ Generally, people are very kind.

The sentence needs the linking verb are because kind is an adjective describing people. In the present tense, use are with the plural subject people.

× Actually, no, I don't think because I live in Turkey, but Turkey doesn't improve in this area because I don't know how I can say it, but generally people are very kind.

✓ Actually, no, I don't think so. I live in Turkey, but Turkey doesn't improve in this area. I don't know how to explain it, but generally, people are very kind.

The original answer joins too many incomplete ideas with because and but. Separate the ideas into shorter, complete sentences. Use I don't think so to complete the response naturally, and use I don't know how to explain it for a clearer sentence structure.