自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 질문에 직접 답했지만 너무 짧아서 점수를 높이기 어렵습니다. 과거의 경험을 한 문장 더 추가하고, 자전거가 없었던 이유나 대신 무엇을 했는지 구체적으로 설명해 보세요. 예를 들어 ‘because’를 사용해 이유를 연결하면 답변이 더 자연스럽고 효과적입니다.

示例: No, I didn’t. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on the busy roads near our home, so I usually played soccer with my friends instead.

建议: 의견을 제시한 점은 좋지만, ‘use to back to doing exercise’는 문법적으로 부자연스럽습니다. ‘Many people use bikes to exercise’ 또는 ‘Many people have started cycling again to get exercise’처럼 표현하세요. 또한 자전거가 인기 있는 이유나 구체적인 장소를 덧붙이고, ‘because’나 ‘especially’를 사용해 내용을 논리적으로 연결해 보세요.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to exercise and commute, especially in big cities where there are dedicated bike lanes. Cycling is also becoming more popular because it is environmentally friendly.

× Yes, I think many people use to back to doing exercise.

✓ Yes, I think many people use bikes to do exercise.

The original sentence has an incorrect verb structure and is missing the object of use. Use is followed by an object and to + the base form of a verb: use bikes to do exercise. Also, back is not appropriate in this context. If you mean exercising again, you can say get back to exercising.