自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ответ прямой и достаточно естественный, но нужно использовать прошедшее время во всём ответе: “rode”, а не “ride”. Также правильно говорить “in the evenings”, а не “at evenings”. Можно добавить одну конкретную деталь, например, куда вы ездили или почему вам это нравилось.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding it. I usually rode it with my friends in the evenings around my neighborhood. We often raced each other or rode to a nearby park.

建议: Начало ответа хорошее, но вторая часть грамматически непонятна: “we also have of comfort obstacles for these” не выражает ясную мысль. Используйте точные выражения, например “bike lanes”, “parking areas” или “comfortable cycling paths”. Свяжите причину и конкретный пример с помощью “because”, “for example” или “however”; также лучше сказать “one of the most convenient means of transport”, поскольку велосипед подходит не для всех.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and university students. They are relatively cheap and convenient for short journeys. For example, many cities have bike lanes, although cycling can still be difficult because of heavy traffic.

× I usually ride it with my friends at evenings in my neighborhood.

✓ I usually rode it with my friends in the evenings in my neighborhood.

The question asks about a past period, when you were a child, so the past form rode is needed instead of the present form ride. Use the past tense consistently when describing past habits.

× I usually ride it with my friends at evenings in my neighborhood.

✓ I usually rode it with my friends in the evenings in my neighborhood.

Use in, not at, with the expression in the evenings. The preposition in is normally used with parts of the day when referring to a general time.

× So we also have of comfort obstacles for these.

✓ So we also have many comfortable facilities for them.

The phrase have of comfort obstacles is not grammatically structured. After have, use a suitable quantity expression such as many, followed by a correctly formed noun phrase. The revised sentence also uses facilities to express a more natural idea.

× So we also have of comfort obstacles for these.

✓ So we also have many comfortable facilities for them.

Use the object pronoun them when referring to people or cyclists after the preposition for. These is a demonstrative determiner or pronoun and is not appropriate in this context.