自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly with the past tense because you are talking about your childhood. Avoid repeating “when I” and use “had” instead of “have.” You could also add one specific detail, such as how often you used the bike or where you rode it.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was three years old. It was small and blue, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my parents.

建议: State your opinion clearly and use the correct noun “bikes” instead of “back.” After “when,” include a subject and a verb, such as “when people go to work.” Use a linking phrase like “because” to give a reason, and add a specific example to make your answer more effective.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to go to work or travel short distances. They are convenient, inexpensive, and environmentally friendly, especially in crowded cities.

× Yes, when I when I was three years old, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was three years old, I had a bike.

The question asks about a past experience, so the past-tense verb had is required instead of the present-tense verb have. The repeated phrase when I is a speaking hesitation and has been removed.

× Yes, because back is commonly used when go to work or go to another place.

✓ Yes, because bikes are commonly used when people go to work or go to another place.

The intended subject is likely bikes, which is plural, so the plural verb are is needed instead of is. Also, back has been corrected to bikes because the context is about bicycles.

× Yes, because back is commonly used when go to work or go to another place.

✓ Yes, because bikes are commonly used when people go to work or go to another place.

The clause when go to work is incomplete because it has no subject. Add the subject people before go: when people go to work. This creates a complete and grammatically correct clause.