自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Use the past-tense structure “didn’t have,” not “didn’t had.” Also, say “be scared of riding a bike” rather than “scared to drive a ride a bike.” Answer directly and add a brief, specific explanation to make your response more natural and complete.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I was scared of riding one. I was worried that I might fall, so I preferred walking or taking the bus.

建议: Your first sentence answers the question clearly, but “usually all people” is an inaccurate overgeneralization. Use “many people” or “a lot of people,” and avoid repeating “in my country.” Add a specific reason or example, such as commuting, exercise, or avoiding traffic. “Bicycles” or “bikes” is more natural than “cycles” in this context.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in crowded cities. Many people use them to commute because they are affordable and help them avoid traffic.

× I didn't had a bike when I was a child because I was scared to drive a ride a bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was scared to ride a bike.

After the past auxiliary did or didn't, use the base form of the main verb, so had must be changed to have. The phrase drive a ride a bike is also incorrect; the natural expression is ride a bike.

× I didn't had a bike when I was a child because I was scared to drive a ride a bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was scared to ride a bike.

The expression drive a ride a bike contains an unnecessary and incorrectly ordered verb phrase. Use scared to ride a bike because ride is the appropriate verb for using a bicycle. Practice common verb combinations such as ride a bike and drive a car.