自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly using the correct past tense: “Yes, I did.” Replace “web” with “bike,” and use “had” rather than “do have” because the question refers to your childhood. You could add one specific detail, such as where you rode it or who bought it for you.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

建议: Your answer is direct and includes a supporting detail, but improve the grammar and naturalness. Say “on every street” or “wherever I go” instead of “every streets that I went down,” and use the present tense consistently: “I see,” not “I will see.” You could also explain why bikes are popular, such as their low cost or convenience.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. Wherever I go, I see lots of people riding them, especially in busy city centers. They are popular because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys.

× Yes, I do have a web when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so the verb should be in the past tense. Use had instead of do have. Bike is also the appropriate word in this context.

× In fact every streets that I went down I will see lots of people riding bikes.

✓ In fact, on every street that I go down, I see lots of people riding bikes.

Every is followed by a singular countable noun, so use street, not streets.

× In fact every streets that I went down I will see lots of people riding bikes.

✓ In fact, on every street that I go down, I see lots of people riding bikes.

Use the preposition on when referring to people or vehicles observed on a street. The phrase on every street is more natural than every street that I went down in this sentence.

× In fact every streets that I went down I will see lots of people riding bikes.

✓ In fact, on every street that I go down, I see lots of people riding bikes.

You are describing a general situation in your country, so use the present tense see. The present-tense phrase I go down also matches this general meaning.

× In fact every streets that I went down I will see lots of people riding bikes.

✓ In fact, on every street that I go down, I see lots of people riding bikes.

Will see refers to the future, but you are talking about a general observation rather than a future event. Use see in the present tense instead.