自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời có ý trả lời trực tiếp, nhưng một số từ và cụm từ chưa chính xác hoặc khó hiểu, chẳng hạn “buyer on” có thể là “bicycle”, “eat through” có thể là “ride it”, và “at evening” nên sửa thành “in the evening”. Em cũng nên dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn: trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó nêu em thường đạp xe đi đâu và với ai. Hãy dùng từ nối như “I often…” hoặc “I usually…” để liên kết các ý, đồng thời tránh lặp lại “I used to”.

示例: Yes, I had a small pink bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it to the park with my friends and family in the evening. I really enjoyed cycling because it was a fun way to spend time outdoors.

建议: Em đã đưa ra quan điểm rõ ràng là xe đạp phổ biến, nhưng phần giải thích còn khó hiểu do dùng sai hoặc thiếu từ, ví dụ “cheap for student and worker” cần chuyển thành “affordable for students and workers”, còn “easy money and radio posing” chưa diễn đạt được ý rõ ràng. Em nên dùng số nhiều khi nói chung: “bikes are popular”, “students and workers”. Hãy phát triển câu trả lời bằng hai lý do cụ thể, chẳng hạn giá rẻ, tiết kiệm nhiên liệu và thuận tiện khi di chuyển; đồng thời giảm các từ ngập ngừng như “Umm” và “Uh”.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and workers. This is because they are affordable and do not require fuel, so people can save money. In addition, bicycles are convenient for travelling short distances and help reduce traffic pollution.

× I used to eat through, go to the park with my friend and my family at evening.

✓ I used to go to the park with my friend and my family in the evening.

The phrase 'eat through' does not form a meaningful structure in this sentence and incorrectly interrupts the verb phrase. Use 'used to go' to express a repeated past activity. Keep the sentence structure as 'subject + used to + base verb + place/time information.'

× I used to eat through, go to the park with my friend and my family at evening.

✓ I used to go to the park with my friend and my family in the evening.

Use the preposition 'in' before parts of the day, such as 'in the evening.' Use 'at' with specific times, for example, 'at 6 p.m.'

× This is because it is very cheap for student and of uh worker and easy money and radio posing.

✓ This is because bicycles are very cheap for students and workers, and they are easy to ride.

The plural nouns 'students' and 'workers' are needed because the statement refers to students and workers in general. When discussing bicycles in general, use the plural noun 'bicycles' and the plural pronoun 'they.'

× This is because it is very cheap for student and of uh worker and easy money and radio posing.

✓ This is because bicycles are very cheap for students and workers, and they are easy to ride.

Use 'for' when describing who benefits from or can afford something: 'cheap for students and workers.' The preposition 'of' is not correct before 'workers' in this sentence.

× This is because it is very cheap for student and of uh worker and easy money and radio posing.

✓ This is because bicycles are very cheap for students and workers, and they are easy to ride.

The original sentence combines incomplete and unclear phrases, such as 'easy money' and 'radio posing.' A clear structure is 'This is because + subject + verb + reason.' Use 'they are easy to ride' to give a complete second reason.