自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn chưa trả lời câu hỏi mà chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu rõ ràng, sau đó thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết như loại xe, thời điểm bạn sử dụng xe hoặc hoạt động bạn thường làm bằng xe đạp.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời đúng chủ đề và đưa ra lý do, nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt. Dùng danh từ số nhiều “bikes”, hiện tại đơn “are” và cấu trúc tự nhiên “make it easy for people to travel from one place to another”. Bạn cũng nên thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn xe đạp không tốn nhiên liệu, thân thiện với môi trường hoặc phổ biến ở các thành phố nhỏ.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they make it easy for people to travel from one place to another. They are also affordable and environmentally friendly, so many students use them to get to school.

× Yes, I think bike is so popular in my country because it had people too easy to go for one place.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they make it easy for people to go from one place to another.

The noun bike is used to talk about bikes in general, so it should be plural: bikes. The plural subject bikes also requires the plural verb are. In addition, they is needed to refer back to bikes, and make it easy for people is the correct structure. Use from one place to another, not go for one place.

× Yes, I think bike is so popular in my country because it had people too easy to go for one place.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they make it easy for people to go from one place to another.

The question asks about bikes in the present, so the present-tense verb make is appropriate. The past-tense verb had does not fit this meaning.

× Yes, I think bike is so popular in my country because it had people too easy to go for one place.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they make it easy for people to go from one place to another.

When describing movement between locations, use the prepositions from and to: go from one place to another. The phrase go for one place is incorrect in this context.

× Yes, I think bike is so popular in my country because it had people too easy to go for one place.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they make it easy for people to go from one place to another.

The structure it had people too easy is not grammatical. Use make it easy for someone to do something: make it easy for people to go. This pattern clearly expresses that bikes help people travel.

× Yes, I think bike is so popular in my country because it had people too easy to go for one place.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they make it easy for people to go from one place to another.

The plural subject bikes must take the plural verb are. The pronoun they is also plural and therefore correctly refers to bikes. Practice matching singular subjects with singular verbs and plural subjects with plural verbs.