自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答基本直接，也给出了原因，但时态和表达不够准确。应将过去经历统一使用一般过去时：将“do not have”改为“didn’t have”，将“cannot ride”改为“couldn’t ride”。另外，“until I was about 18”表示直到18岁才会骑车，因此前面的原因可以表达得更自然。建议补充一个具体细节，例如小时候主要使用什么交通工具，但控制在2—3句话内。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I couldn’t ride one until I was about 18. I usually walked to school or took the bus instead.

建议: 回答观点明确，但存在冠词、单复数、句子结构和连接问题。“bike”应改为复数“bikes”，“especially I live in Taipei”应改为“especially in Taipei, where...”，并删除重复的“which where”和“you bike”。建议使用清晰的结构：先直接回答，再说明台北的情况，最后补充具体原因或例子，例如公共自行车系统和骑车通勤。

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in Taipei, where cycling is a common way to get around. Many people ride bikes to work or use the public bike-sharing system because it is convenient and environmentally friendly.

× No, I do not have a bike when I was little because I cannot ride a bike until I was about 18 years old.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was little because I could not ride a bike until I was about 18 years old.

问题类型：5（过去时错误）。题目询问童年时期的情况，所以应该使用过去时。将“do not have”改为“did not have”，表示过去没有自行车。

× No, I do not have a bike when I was little because I cannot ride a bike until I was about 18 years old.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was little because I could not ride a bike until I was about 18 years old.

问题类型：4（情态动词使用错误）。因为是在描述过去的能力，不能使用现在时“cannot”，应该使用过去式情态动词“could not”。

× Yes, of course. I do think bike is popular in my country, especially I live in Taipei which where, uh, you bike, uh, you bike is very common, so people usually ride the bike every day.

✓ Yes, of course. I do think bikes are popular in my country, especially in Taipei, where biking is very common, so people usually ride bikes every day.

问题类型：1（单复数错误）。这里是在泛指自行车和骑自行车这一活动，因此使用复数“bikes”和“ride bikes”更合适。主语“bikes”是复数，所以谓语也要使用“are”，不能使用“is”。

× Yes, of course. I do think bike is popular in my country, especially I live in Taipei which where, uh, you bike, uh, you bike is very common, so people usually ride the bike every day.

✓ Yes, of course. I do think bikes are popular in my country, especially in Taipei, where biking is very common, so people usually ride bikes every day.

问题类型：11（介词使用错误）。“especially I live in Taipei”缺少介词。表示“尤其是在台北”时，应使用“especially in Taipei”。

× Yes, of course. I do think bike is popular in my country, especially I live in Taipei which where, uh, you bike, uh, you bike is very common, so people usually ride the bike every day.

✓ Yes, of course. I do think bikes are popular in my country, especially in Taipei, where biking is very common, so people usually ride bikes every day.

问题类型：26（句子结构错误）。“especially I live in Taipei which where”结构混乱，不能同时使用“which”和“where”。可以改为“especially in Taipei, where biking is very common”。另外，“you bike is”也不是正确结构；表达“骑自行车很普遍”时，应使用动名词“biking”作主语。

× Yes, of course. I do think bike is popular in my country, especially I live in Taipei which where, uh, you bike, uh, you bike is very common, so people usually ride the bike every day.

✓ Yes, of course. I do think bikes are popular in my country, especially in Taipei, where biking is very common, so people usually ride bikes every day.

问题类型：8（动词-ing形式错误）。这里需要一个名词作主语，表示“骑自行车这项活动”，所以应将“you bike”改为动名词“biking”。“Biking is very common”表示“骑自行车很普遍”。

× Yes, of course. I do think bike is popular in my country, especially I live in Taipei which where, uh, you bike, uh, you bike is very common, so people usually ride the bike every day.

✓ Yes, of course. I do think bikes are popular in my country, especially in Taipei, where biking is very common, so people usually ride bikes every day.

问题类型：22（冠词错误）。泛指自行车时，不需要使用“the”，也不能直接使用单数可数名词“bike”。应使用复数“bikes”或“a bike”。这里描述一般情况，所以使用“bikes”和“ride bikes”最自然。