自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly and use clearer grammar and vocabulary. Say “I didn’t own a bike” rather than “I didn’t own the bike.” Also, use “my dad’s bike” instead of “my dad,” and use the verb “ride,” not “write.” Avoid unclear phrases such as “for her to how to learn” and organize your answer with a simple reason or example.

示例: No, I didn’t own a bike when I was a child. However, I sometimes borrowed my dad’s bike and practiced riding it in our neighborhood. It took me quite a while to learn, but I eventually became more confident.

建议: Give a direct answer and improve grammatical accuracy. Use the plural pronoun “them” for “motorbikes,” and say “people can travel more easily and quickly” instead of “they can get travel easier and faster.” You could also distinguish between bicycles and motorbikes and provide a specific reason, such as traffic, distance, or convenience.

示例: Bicycles are not as popular as motorbikes in my country. Many people prefer motorbikes because they can travel more quickly and easily, especially in busy cities. Motorbikes are also practical for commuting and are usually cheaper to run than cars.

× I didn't really own the bike when I was young, but although sometimes I use my dad, I remember like practicing and training so much for her to how to learn to write it probably.

✓ I didn't really own a bike when I was young, although I sometimes used my dad's bike. I remember practicing and training a lot to learn how to ride it properly.

The bike refers to a bike that has not been mentioned before, so the indefinite article a is needed instead of the definite article the.

× I didn't really own the bike when I was young, but although sometimes I use my dad, I remember like practicing and training so much for her to how to learn to write it probably.

✓ I didn't really own a bike when I was young, although I sometimes used my dad's bike. I remember practicing and training a lot to learn how to ride it properly.

But and although should not be used together to connect the same clauses. Use either but or although. Although is more suitable here because it introduces a contrast.

× I didn't really own the bike when I was young, but although sometimes I use my dad, I remember like practicing and training so much for her to how to learn to write it probably.

✓ I didn't really own a bike when I was young, although I sometimes used my dad's bike. I remember practicing and training a lot to learn how to ride it properly.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the actions should be expressed in the past tense. Use used instead of use.

× I didn't really own the bike when I was young, but although sometimes I use my dad, I remember like practicing and training so much for her to how to learn to write it probably.

✓ I didn't really own a bike when I was young, although I sometimes used my dad's bike. I remember practicing and training a lot to learn how to ride it properly.

Her is an incorrect pronoun because the bike belongs to the student's father. Use my dad's bike to show possession clearly. Also, the subject I should be used instead of an object pronoun when necessary.

× I didn't really own the bike when I was young, but although sometimes I use my dad, I remember like practicing and training so much for her to how to learn to write it probably.

✓ I didn't really own a bike when I was young, although I sometimes used my dad's bike. I remember practicing and training a lot to learn how to ride it properly.

The original sentence contains several incorrectly connected phrases, such as remember like practicing and for her to how to learn. Use remember + verb-ing and to learn how to + verb to create grammatical sentence structures.

× So in my country I think motorbikes are more popular and people prefer it over bikes since they can get travel with motorcycles or cars easier and faster than bikes.

✓ In my country, I think motorbikes are more popular, and people prefer them to bicycles because they can travel by motorcycle or car more easily and quickly than by bicycle.

Motorbikes is plural, so it must be replaced by the plural pronoun them. The pronoun must agree in number with the noun it refers to.

× So in my country I think motorbikes are more popular and people prefer it over bikes since they can get travel with motorcycles or cars easier and faster than bikes.

✓ In my country, I think motorbikes are more popular, and people prefer them to bicycles because they can travel by motorcycle or car more easily and quickly than by bicycle.

After the modal verb can, use the base form of the verb. Therefore, can travel is correct, not can get travel.

× So in my country I think motorbikes are more popular and people prefer it over bikes since they can get travel with motorcycles or cars easier and faster than bikes.

✓ In my country, I think motorbikes are more popular, and people prefer them to bicycles because they can travel by motorcycle or car more easily and quickly than by bicycle.

Easily and quickly modify the verb travel, so adverbs are needed instead of the adjectives easier and faster. The comparative adverbs more easily and more quickly are used to compare the two ways of travelling.