自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答方向是正确的，但存在明显的语法错误、重复和句子不完整的问题。首先，应使用过去时：将“own”改为“owned”，将“is from”改为“was from”或“was given to me by”。其次，“1010 years old”表达不清楚，应直接说“10 years old”。最后一句没有完成，影响连贯性。建议采用“直接回答 + 来源/细节 + 使用感受”的结构，并用“because”或“so”连接信息。

示例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was about ten years old, and it was given to me by my older brother. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, so it was an important part of my childhood.

建议: 你能够回答“是”，并提到共享单车和出行用途，内容基本切题。但需要改进主谓一致和代词：将“my country have”改为“my country has”，“everybody use”改为“everybody uses”，“it”可改为“them”指代共享单车。表达中有较多重复和填充词，如“get, get, get”和“uh”，使答案不够自然。最后的原因没有表达完整，建议清楚说明人们骑车是因为距离近、方便，而且可以避免交通拥堵。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes in large cities. Many people use them to travel short distances instead of driving because they are convenient and help people avoid traffic jams. They are also a relatively environmentally friendly way to get around.

× Yes I did and I own a bike when I was about 1010 years old.

✓ Yes, I did, and I owned a bike when I was about 10 years old.

问题类型：5。因为问题是在询问童年经历，应该使用一般过去时。动词“own”需要改为过去式“owned”。“1010”应为口语重复，正确表达是“10”。建议：描述过去发生的事情时，注意使用动词的过去式。

× The bike is from my brother and he was older than me and when I was 10 years old he.

✓ The bike was from my brother, and he was older than me.

问题类型：5。这里描述的是童年时期的情况，所以“is”应改为过去式“was”。原句末尾的“when I was 10 years old he”没有完整表达意思，删除后句子更完整。建议：讲述过去经历时，统一使用过去时，并避免在句末留下未完成的从句。

× The bike is from my brother and he was older than me and when I was 10 years old he.

✓ The bike was from my brother, and he was older than me.

问题类型：26。原句包含多个“and”，且最后的“when I was 10 years old he”是不完整的句子结构，缺少后续谓语或完整意思。建议：一个句子不要连接过多分句；如果一个从句没有表达完整意思，应删除或补充完整。

× Yes, my country have shared bikes on the street and everybody use it to, umm, get, get, get some, uh, nearby places instead of, uh, driving a car for, uh, for the reason that, uh, maybe there is no necessary to.

✓ Yes, my country has shared bikes on the streets, and everybody uses them to get to nearby places instead of driving a car because it may not be necessary to drive.

问题类型：27。“my country”是第三人称单数，所以“have”应改为“has”；“everybody”虽然表示很多人，但语法上是单数，所以“use”应改为“uses”。建议：注意主语是单数还是复数；“everybody、everyone、someone”等词后面的动词通常使用第三人称单数形式。

× Yes, my country have shared bikes on the street and everybody use it to, umm, get, get, get some, uh, nearby places instead of, uh, driving a car for, uh, for the reason that, uh, maybe there is no necessary to.

✓ Yes, my country has shared bikes on the streets, and everybody uses them to get to nearby places instead of driving a car because it may not be necessary to drive.

问题类型：2。“my country”和“everybody”都属于第三人称单数主语，因此一般现在时中，动词需要加“-s”或使用相应的第三人称单数形式：have → has，use → uses。建议：在一般现在时中，看到he、she、it、单数名词以及everybody等不定代词时，检查动词是否需要加“-s”。

× Yes, my country have shared bikes on the street and everybody use it to, umm, get, get, get some, uh, nearby places instead of, uh, driving a car for, uh, for the reason that, uh, maybe there is no necessary to.

✓ Yes, my country has shared bikes on the streets, and everybody uses them to get to nearby places instead of driving a car because it may not be necessary to drive.

问题类型：12。“shared bikes”是复数名词，因此应该用复数宾格代词“them”，不能用单数“it”。建议：代词要与所指代的名词在数上保持一致：单数用it，复数用them。

× Yes, my country have shared bikes on the street and everybody use it to, umm, get, get, get some, uh, nearby places instead of, uh, driving a car for, uh, for the reason that, uh, maybe there is no necessary to.

✓ Yes, my country has shared bikes on the streets, and everybody uses them to get to nearby places instead of driving a car because it may not be necessary to drive.

问题类型：11。“get”表示“到达某地”时，通常要使用介词“to”，所以应说“get to nearby places”。建议：记住固定搭配“get to + 地点”，例如“get to school”和“get to work”。

× Yes, my country have shared bikes on the street and everybody use it to, umm, get, get, get some, uh, nearby places instead of, uh, driving a car for, uh, for the reason that, uh, maybe there is no necessary to.

✓ Yes, my country has shared bikes on the streets, and everybody uses them to get to nearby places instead of driving a car because it may not be necessary to drive.

问题类型：22。这里说的是城市中许多街道上的共享单车，使用复数“streets”比单数“the street”更自然。建议：表达一般情况时，可以使用复数名词，如“on the streets”；表达特定的一条街时，才使用“on the street”。

× Yes, my country have shared bikes on the street and everybody use it to, umm, get, get, get some, uh, nearby places instead of, uh, driving a car for, uh, for the reason that, uh, maybe there is no necessary to.

✓ Yes, my country has shared bikes on the streets, and everybody uses them to get to nearby places instead of driving a car because it may not be necessary to drive.

问题类型：13。“necessary”是形容词，不能直接用于“There is no necessary to”这个结构。应改为“it may not be necessary to drive”，其中“necessary”用来说明“drive”这件事是否有必要。建议：表达“没有必要做某事”时，使用“It is not necessary to + 动词原形”。