自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 質問には直接答えられていますが、1文だけで終わっているため、内容がやや短く、発展性に欠けます。例えば、どんな自転車だったか、どこで乗ったか、どのくらい使ったかなどの具体的な詳細を1つ加えると、より自然で効果的な回答になります。また、「when I was a child」の繰り返しを避け、「back then」などの表現を使うと、より自然です。

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

建议: 意見と理由を述べている点は良いですが、「I think」と「in my opinion」の重複や、「now, right now」「uh」の繰り返しにより、やや冗長で流暢さが損なわれています。「shared bicycle」は複数形の「shared bicycles」とし、「all over the city」のように語順を修正しましょう。また、「people are used to get on a bicycle」は不自然なので、「people are getting used to riding bicycles」または「more people are choosing to ride bicycles」と表現できます。最初に結論を述べ、その後に都市部でのシェアサイクルの普及という具体的な理由を簡潔に加えると、より明確です。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country, especially in large cities. This is mainly because shared bicycles are available throughout the city, so more people are choosing to ride them for short trips.

× Yes, I think it's getting more popular than ever in my opinion, because now, right now, uh, in the city, there are shared, uh, bicycle all over.

✓ Yes, I think they are becoming more popular than ever. In my opinion, there are shared bicycles all over the city now.

The subject refers to bikes, which is plural, so use the plural pronoun they instead of the singular pronoun it. Practice matching pronouns with the number of the nouns they refer to.

× There are shared, uh, bicycle all over.

✓ There are shared bicycles all over the city.

The expression there are requires a plural noun. Therefore, bicycle must be changed to bicycles. Remember to use a plural noun after there are.

× So that's why I think people are used to get on a bicycle more.

✓ So that's why I think people are used to getting on bicycles more often.

When be used to means be accustomed to, to is a preposition, so it must be followed by a gerund ending in -ing. Therefore, get should become getting. Use be used to + verb-ing, as in people are used to riding bicycles.