自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Soruyu cevaplamak yerine aynen tekrar etmişsiniz; bu nedenle soruya doğrudan yanıt vermelisiniz. Önce net bir konu cümlesi kullanın (örneğin “Yes, I did.”), ardından çocukluğunuzdaki bisikletiniz veya onu nasıl kullandığınız hakkında 1-2 destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin. Cevabınızı 2-3 doğal cümleyle tamamlayabilirsiniz.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight years old, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建议: Ana fikriniz anlaşılabilir; ancak “public” burada yanlış kelime ve “let lots of people use bikes” ifadesi doğal değil. “Popular” veya “widely used” kullanarak soruya doğrudan cevap verin. Ayrıca bisikletlerin neden popüler olduğunu belirtmek için “because” veya “especially” gibi bağlayıcı ifadeler ekleyin. Fiil yapısına dikkat ederek “Many people use bikes” demelisiniz.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people use them for exercise and short journeys because they are affordable and environmentally friendly.

× Yes, bikes are public in our country, let lots of people use bikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country, and lots of people use bikes.

The adjective public does not correctly describe how common bikes are. Use popular to mean liked or commonly used. This sentence also needs a conjunction to connect the two independent clauses. Use and before lots of people use bikes.

× Yes, bikes are public in our country, let lots of people use bikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country, and lots of people use bikes.

A comma alone cannot properly connect the two ideas. Add the coordinating conjunction and to show that the second idea is related to the first. Also, replace public with popular because popular is the correct adjective in this context.