自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接回应了问题，也提供了年龄、人物和经历等细节，内容比较具体。但存在较多时态和搭配错误：应将“practice”改为“practiced”，“will taught”改为“taught”，“after the lunch”改为“after lunch”；“bought me a pink bag”与自行车不一致，可能想表达“bought me a pink bike”。此外，句子过长，重复使用“and”，影响流畅度。建议使用“because”“although”等连接词，并将答案控制在3—4句内。

示例: Yes, I did. When I was seven, my aunt bought me a pink bike. I practiced riding it every afternoon after lunch, and she patiently taught me how to balance. I fell down a few times, but I eventually learned to ride it.

建议: 回答表达了“自行车很受欢迎”的核心观点，并提到环保原因，但后半部分没有完整结束，信息不够清晰。应使用复数“bikes are popular”，并将“with the growing of global warming”改为“because of growing concerns about global warming”。避免重复“we people/we humans”和过多填充词，如“you know”和“umm”。建议补充具体场景或结果，例如城市中的共享单车、骑车通勤，以及自行车如何减少空气污染。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Because of growing concerns about global warming, more people are choosing bicycles for short journeys instead of driving. In addition, bike-sharing schemes have made cycling more convenient and affordable.

× When I was seven years old, my aunt bought me a pink bag and I practice it every afternoon after the lunch, and my aunt will taught me again and again, and I fell down.

✓ When I was seven years old, my aunt bought me a pink bag, and I practiced it every afternoon after lunch. My aunt taught me again and again, and I fell down.

这段话描述的是童年时发生的事情，所以动词应使用过去时。practice 应改为 practiced；will taught 不能用于过去的叙述，应改为 taught。这里没有必要使用 will。

× my aunt will taught me again and again

✓ My aunt taught me again and again.

will 表示将来时，和“When I was seven years old”所描述的过去时间不一致。此外，will 后面必须接动词原形 teach，而不能接过去式 taught。因为这里讲的是过去发生的事情，直接使用过去式 taught 最合适。

× after the lunch

✓ after lunch

表示一日三餐的一般概念时，lunch 前通常不使用 the。因此应说 after lunch，而不是 after the lunch。只有在指特定的一顿午餐时，才可能使用 the lunch。

× Yeah, it's very popular in my country.

✓ Yeah, they are very popular in my country.

问题中的主语是复数 bikes，因此回答中不能用单数代词 it 和单数动词 is。应使用复数代词 they 和复数动词 are。

× Yeah, it's very popular in my country.

✓ Yeah, they are very popular in my country.

bikes 是复数名词，应该用复数代词 they 指代，而不是单数代词 it。回答有关复数事物时，要注意代词的数与所指名词保持一致。

× and umm, uh, is very umm.

✓ And it is very important.

原句中的 is 前面缺少主语，而且句子没有表达完整意思。补充主语 it，并使用完整的形容词短语 very important，句子才完整。口语中即使停顿，也应尽量说出完整的句子。