自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly, then give the reason. Use the past form “wouldn’t allow” instead of “will allow” because you are talking about childhood. Also, avoid repeating “bike” and make the reason more natural by saying that your parents were worried about you getting injured.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents wouldn’t allow me to ride one. They were worried that I might get injured, so I usually played indoors instead.

建议: Give a clear opinion and support it with a specific observation or example. Replace “much bikes” with “many bikes,” and avoid repeating the idea that people like owning bikes. “People want bikes of every model” is unnatural; instead, explain whether people use bicycles for commuting, exercise, or leisure.

示例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and fitness enthusiasts. Many people ride them for exercise or to avoid traffic, and some even buy different types of bikes for commuting and weekend trips.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents will allow me to ride a bike since they thought I would get injured.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents wouldn't allow me to ride a bike since they thought I would get injured.

Grammar problem type ID 5: Past tense issue. The question refers to a past situation, so will allow must be changed to wouldn't allow. Wouldn't is the past form used to describe what the parents were unwilling to permit at that time. When talking about past events, make sure the verbs remain consistent with the past tense.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because I have seen many people wanting to have much bikes.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because I have seen many people wanting to have many bikes.

Grammar problem type ID 14: Incorrect use of quantifiers. Bikes is a countable plural noun, so it must be modified by many, not much. Use many with countable nouns, such as bikes, cars, and books, and use much with uncountable nouns, such as money, time, and water.