自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Use the past tense consistently: say “didn’t have” instead of “don’t have,” and add the article “a” before “child.” Also, “write” means to form letters; the correct word here is probably “ride.” Begin with a direct answer and then give a brief reason.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I couldn’t ride one. My parents were worried that I might fall and hurt myself.

建议: State your opinion clearly with “Yes, I think bikes are popular.” Use the correct plural form “bikes” rather than “a bikes,” and replace “a pie sub” with “bikes are.” To make the answer more specific and coherent, explain where you see people riding bikes and use a linking word such as “because” or “for example.”

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many teenagers ride them to school and around their neighborhoods. For example, I often see groups of young people cycling in the parks at weekends.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was child because I couldn't write.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I couldn't write.

The question asks about your childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change don't have to didn't have. The past-tense form couldn't is already correct.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was child because I couldn't write.

✓ No, I don't have a bike when I was a child because I couldn't write.

Use the indefinite article a before the singular countable noun child. The correct phrase is a child, not child.

× Yes, a pie sub popular in my country because I saw teenagers ride a bikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because I saw teenagers ride bikes.

The subject is plural, bikes, so it must be followed by the plural verb are. The phrase a pie sub is not grammatically correct; bikes are is the appropriate subject and verb combination.

× Yes, a pie sub popular in my country because I saw teenagers ride a bikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because I saw teenagers ride bikes.

Bikes is plural, so it cannot be used with the singular article a. Also, after the verb ride, use the plural noun bikes when speaking about bicycles in general.

× Yes, a pie sub popular in my country because I saw teenagers ride a bikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because I saw teenagers ride bikes.

Do not use a before the plural noun bikes. When talking about bicycles in general, use bikes without an article.