自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: You did not answer the examiner’s question and appeared to misunderstand the words “bike” and “child.” Listen for the key nouns in the question and give a direct answer first. You could say whether you had a bike and then add one specific detail, such as who gave it to you or where you rode it. Keep the response to two or three clear sentences.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建议: You gave a positive answer, but the rest of the response is difficult to understand because of incorrect word choices, grammar, and repetition. Use the topic word “bikes” consistently, avoid repeating “in my country,” and explain your opinion with one clear reason or example. A useful structure is: “Yes, I think bikes are popular because… For example…”

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They are convenient and inexpensive, and many people use them to travel short distances or exercise.

× Yes, I think the buds are popular in my country but in my country it's not have the special lens for any bites but in their natural.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, but there aren't any special lanes for bikes there.

Use there are or there aren't to say that something exists or does not exist. The structure it's not have is not grammatical because have cannot follow it is in this sentence. Also, use the plural noun lanes because you are referring to more than one lane.

× Yes, I think the buds are popular in my country but in my country it's not have the special lens for any bites but in their natural.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, but there aren't any special lanes for bikes there, and people usually ride them in natural areas.

The original sentence combines several incomplete or unclear parts with repeated but. A clearer structure uses one main clause followed by a contrast with but and an additional idea joined with and. Natural areas is a complete noun phrase; in their natural is incomplete because natural needs a noun after it.