自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ответ раскрывает вопрос и содержит конкретную деталь о брате и совместных поездках. Однако слишком много filler words («uh»), а фраза «me and my brother were sharing» звучит менее естественно. Используйте более естественную конструкцию «my brother and I shared a bicycle» и сократите повторения. Хорошая структура: прямой ответ → уточнение о том, с кем вы делили велосипед → описание того, как вы его использовали.

示例: Yes, I did, although my brother and I shared one bicycle when we were children. We lived in the countryside, so we often took turns riding it or rode together around our village.

建议: Ответ начинается прямо и содержит противопоставление, но он обрывается и не завершает основную мысль. Выражение «in case or people» грамматически неверно; лучше сказать «when people want to get some exercise». Фраза «as a transport, it's not» требует продолжения, например «they are not very popular as a means of transport». Добавьте конкретную причину, например плохую инфраструктуру, дорожное движение или жаркую погоду.

示例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among people who want to get some exercise. However, they are not widely used as a means of transport because many cities have heavy traffic and few safe cycling lanes.

× Generally, me and my brother were sharing one bicycle in the countryside.

✓ Generally, my brother and I were sharing one bicycle in the countryside.

When two people are the subject of a sentence, use subject pronouns. My brother and I is correct because the pronouns perform the action of sharing. Me is an object pronoun and should not be used as part of the subject. For improvement, identify the subject by asking who performs the action, and use I, he, she, we, or they.

× They are only popular in case or people want to get some physical activity.

✓ They are popular mainly among people who want to get some physical activity.

In case does not fit this meaning, and it cannot be followed by or people in this structure. The phrase among people who clearly expresses that bicycles are popular with people who want exercise. For improvement, use who to introduce a relative clause describing people, and use in case only to describe a possible condition or precaution.

× However, as a transport, it's not.

✓ However, they are not commonly used as a means of transport.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Therefore, the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are are needed. The original sentence is also incomplete because not does not clearly state what is not true. For improvement, make sure that pronouns agree in number with the nouns they replace and complete the idea after a negative verb.