自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ваша відповідь зрозуміла, але містить помилки в граматиці, словоскладанні та стилі. По-перше, використовуйте правильні форми дієслів (наприклад, «he taught me»). По-друге, уникайте зайвої повторюваності («when I was a child» сказано двічі). По-третє, зробіть відповідь більш природною, об’єднавши деталі в 2–3 речення з логічними зв’язками (linking words).

示例: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a pink bike when I was about seven, and he taught me how to ride it in our garden.

建议: Відповідь має хорошу ідею, але вона нечітко сформульована і має граматичні помилки («we haven't a lot of bike roads»). Використовуйте повні речення, правильні артиклі та більш точну лексику (наприклад, «bike lanes» або «cycling infrastructure»). Додайте зв'язник для логічності та один конкретний приклад або наслідок для підкріплення думки.

示例: I don't think cycling is very popular here because we lack dedicated bike lanes on most streets, so people usually cycle only in parks or on quieter roads, which makes cycling less convenient for daily commuting.

× My dad bought me a bike when I was a child.

✓ My dad bought me a bike when I was a child.

No correction needed; verb 'bought' correctly uses past simple to describe a past event.

× It was a pink color and he teach me how to use it.

✓ It was pink, and he taught me how to use it.

'Pink color' is redundant in English; use adjective 'pink' alone: 'It was pink'. The verb 'teach' is incorrect for a past event; use past simple 'taught' to match the past timeframe. Also add a comma and conjunction for clarity.

× No I don't think that bikes are popular in my country because we haven't a lot of bike roads in our streets so you have to go outside in parks and right there.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because we don't have many bike lanes on our streets, so you have to go to parks to ride them.

Several issues: 'we haven't a lot of' is ungrammatical; use 'we don't have many' (negative auxiliary + main verb and appropriate quantifier). 'Bike roads' is unnatural; 'bike lanes' is the correct term. 'In our streets' should be 'on our streets'. 'Go outside in parks and right there' is awkward; specify 'go to parks to ride them'. Also tense/modal 'have to' is acceptable for obligation, kept as 'you have to' but rephrased for clarity.