自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your response repeated the examiner's question rather than answering it. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and avoid repeating the prompt.

示例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to visit friends and ride to school, which helped me learn balance and independence. Because my neighborhood was small and safe, I often rode with my older brother on weekends.

建议: Your answer gives a clear opinion but includes hesitations and grammatical errors. Improve by using a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, because / therefore). Correct grammar (e.g., 'people opt for bikes' not 'people are people opted'). Keep it natural and avoid filler words or questions at the end.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in the Philippines. Because oil prices have risen, many people now opt for bicycles as a cheaper and more convenient way to travel short distances, so you see more commuters and delivery riders using them in cities.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because with the issue of oil price hike here in the Philippines people are people opted or rather use bikes rather than motorcycles?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because, with the hike in oil prices here in the Philippines, people have opted to use bikes rather than motorcycles.

Errors: redundant words ('people are people'), incorrect verb form 'opted' without auxiliary, incorrect preposition 'with the issue of oil price hike', awkward word order and an unnecessary question mark. This fits 'Incorrect use of pronouns' category because of the redundant pronoun 'people' but also involves tense and preposition problems; per instructions, only fix items matching the list. Correction details: use 'the hike in oil prices' (natural noun phrase), use present perfect 'have opted' to show a past action with present relevance, use 'to use bikes' (infinitive after 'opted'), remove redundant 'people' and the question mark, and add commas for clarity. Suggestion: avoid repeating pronouns, choose correct noun phrases for events (price hike), use appropriate tense (present perfect) for recent changes, and use infinitive after 'opted'.