自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve accuracy, grammar and clarity. Begin with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms and word choice, and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. For example, say you didn’t have a bike, explain the reason in past-tense, and add a brief consequence or additional detail.

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my mother thought it was too dangerous. As a result, I learned to walk or use public transport instead, and I only started cycling later when I was older and more confident.

建议: Provide a fuller, natural answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details and use linking words. Mention where bikes are popular, who uses them, or why they are popular to make the response informative and coherent.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For instance, many people use them in cities for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and cycling has also become more common for exercise and leisure in recent years.

× No, I didn't have a back when I was a child because my mother won't allow me to use bike because it's too dangerous.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my mother wouldn't allow me to use a bike because she thought it was too dangerous.

Errors: 'back' is a wrong word; should be 'bike' (vocabulary). Also tense and modality: the student is speaking about the past, so 'won't allow' is incorrect (future/modal) and should be 'wouldn't allow' or 'didn't allow'. Use of 'use bike' lacks an article: add 'a bike'. Finally, 'it's too dangerous' refers to past viewpoint so 'she thought it was too dangerous' is clearer. Suggestions: replace incorrect word 'back' with 'bike'; match modality and tense to past by using 'wouldn't' or 'didn't'; include the article 'a' before 'bike'; and make the time reference consistent by changing 'it's' to 'it was'.

× Yes, it is.

✓ Yes, they are.

Error: The question asked about 'bikes' (plural), so the reply 'it is' uses a singular pronoun and verb, which disagrees with the plural subject. Use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' to agree with 'bikes'. Suggestion: refer back to the noun's number in the question and match pronoun and verb accordingly; answer 'Yes, they are' or 'Yes, they are popular.'