自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 문법과 시제 일치를 개선하세요. 예: 과거 상황에는 과거형을 사용해야 합니다(예: 'I had', 'we cycled'). 또한 일부 표현은 더 자연스럽게 다듬을 수 있습니다. 응답 구조는 주제 문장(예: 'Yes, I did.')으로 시작한 뒤 한두 개의 구체적 세부사항(누구와, 얼마나 자주, 왜 특별했는지)을 연결어(예: 'and', 'so', 'because')로 자연스럽게 이어주세요. 문장 수는 3–4문장으로 제한해 불필요한 반복을 피하세요.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike and I loved cycling with my friends. We cycled almost every day after school, and those rides are my fondest childhood memories because they made me feel free and happy.

建议: 명확한 주제 문장으로 시작하고 이유와 구체적인 예를 덧붙이세요. 문법과 반복을 고치세요('people people' 중복 제거, 'not many roads' 등). 연결어('however', 'because', 'so')를 사용해 논리를 명확히 하며 문장 수는 3문장 내외로 유지하세요.

示例: I think biking is becoming more popular in my country. However, there are not many safe cycle lanes, so many people still prefer cars. Nevertheless, cycling clubs and weekend events are encouraging more people to take up biking.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child and I used to like cycling with my friends.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I used to like cycling with my friends.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use past tense verbs consistently for past events.'

× We used to cycling every day and it's the most beautiful memory of my childhood.

✓ We used to cycle every day and it was the most beautiful memory of my childhood.

After 'used to' the base form of the verb is required (not the -ing form), so 'cycle' is correct. Also the sentence refers to a past memory so 'it was' should be used instead of 'it's'. Suggestion: use 'used to' + base verb and keep past tense for past memories.'

× I think it's getting popular in my country, but we don't have that much road that we can cycle.

✓ I think it's becoming popular in my country, but we don't have many roads where we can cycle.

Use 'becoming' or 'getting' is acceptable, but 'getting popular' is informal; 'it's becoming popular' is better. More importantly, 'that much road' is uncountable phrasing; use plural countable 'many roads'. Also 'that we can cycle' should be rephrased to 'where we can cycle' to show place. Suggestion: use correct countable noun forms and relative clause 'where'.'

× But people people are getting more interested in biking.

✓ But people are getting more interested in biking.

The word 'people' is mistakenly repeated. Remove the duplicate to correct the sentence. Suggestion: proofread to avoid repeated words.'